Review of chapter "Changing the Death Toll" from banner
This is going to be good!
Review By [banner
] • Date [2 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changing the Death Toll" from JenC
Well this was an interesting beginning. Am I correct in assuming that the babies that they rescued were future Jedi?
I liked your last line about learning their lesson last time. Heehee. I have never been very fond of Willow, and that story arc just made me mad.
Anyway, great start. I can't wait to see what you are going to have them do next.
Review By [JenC
] • Date [2 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]