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Review of chapter "parts 17 & 18" from Harry
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Sounds like Kendra has a thing for Charles, and it is affecting the way she goes about her job as the Slayer. Not good for her. But now, Jean Grey has arrived. The FIRST of the X-Men! Hopefully, Kendra and Jean will not mesh in such a way as to cause romantic problems for one another.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 15 and 16" from Harry
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Sounds like Kendra is having trouble blending in on her assignment of being the Slayer, while staying with Xavier. And while the Mace might be nice, its not as effective as a stake is for taking out Vampires.
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 13 and 14" from Harry
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A child Vampire? That is the among the worst. They look like children, and use that innocent look to get their victim into their clutches!
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 11 and 12" from Harry
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Well, the recruitment has started. But, it will not be easy, Not every mutant wants to be outed as one, or wants to attend a school for them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 9 and 10" from Harry
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Ahh yes. The Xavier School for Gifted Youngsters. A dream that has a noble goal. But, achieving such a goal is going to be a bumpy road.
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 7 and 8" from Harry
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Victoria Grey, eh? I wonder if she related in any way to Jean Grey? And the way that the Vampires are destroyed, are DEFINITELY different than the vampires we are used to seeing.
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 5 and 6" from Harry
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Charles and Erik working on the early plans for Cerebro. This truly DOES date this as late 1950's early 1960's.
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "parts 3 and 4" from Harry
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Charles is having a problem wrapping his head around the healing and stamina of a slayer. And that is something he is only going to be able to overcome by seeing her in action!
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changing Time - parts 1 and 2" from Harry
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So, we are the BEGINNING of the formation of the X-Men, back when Charles Xavier was searching for mutants. This timeline will be VERY different for Kendra than she is used to!
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapters 46 to 48" from raxadian
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Oh, he won't laugh I am sure.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 44 and 45" from raxadian
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Too bad she doesn't trust Doctor Strange more.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 42 and 43" from raxadian
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Wow, Mystique is that old?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 40 and 41" from raxadian
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You have developed Kendra into a smart young woman that's interesting.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 37 to 39" from raxadian
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i wonder if the Marvel universe has its own version of DC comics amazons?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 35 and 36" from raxadian
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Well, the military getting involved could indeed go horrible wrong.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [6 Aug 14] • Not Rated
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