Are you going to do more on what exactly is the first, like how you made the PTB into bitches playing chess with lives and useing them for pleasure, or leave it as the intangible personification of evil itself...can't see that since you have at least another 4 saga titles afterwards and it would be pretty hard to top a force that had been around for all of existance growing more powerful with every evil dead, blah, blah, blah.

When is there going to be a superhuman for the BZ-verse, given the difference in power wouldn't dawn have been able to reach it in the DBZ-verse when they visited, is there going to be a superhuman 2 level, and is there more to buffy and her beau's relationship, cause it seems kinda weird...much better than a corpse...but weird

That's all, thanks for the epic that doesn't suck ass...although I can't really talk my attempts don't make over 15 pages on word...and it still sucks :)

PS is Xanderzone shut down it hasn't been active for months, or is it simply lack of stories

The First and its nature will come up in the next episode.

As for Super Human: no. It doesn't matter what the surrounding energy levels are, it's the person that matters. When it comes to Super Human it's more skill than power. In fact, since the Super Human comes from pulling energy directly out of another plain of existence, the more energy (Buffy verse) the more easier it would be, and thus HARDER in the DBZ-verse. Hence Krillin and co. considering how much easier they can do things in the Buffy-verse, and that it was as if they were "coming home"

Krillin reached Super Human level 2 in "Hero Defined", the DBZ/SM crossover 'meanwhile' story. Which you can find on here I believe, as well as on my homepage.

The Yahoo group XanderZone gets still lots of stories. The Archive hasn't been updated mainly due to reasons from the archiver, and that it's becoming too big to handle on his own.

Finally read all of the Z series and like them, you obviously take a lot of time on them and I am greatful. Although when the time comes to release the super vamps I can just see them smirk and blow the them away. I guess that means no army of Slayer look forward to the rest of the series. Might be cool if you did something with the Majin Buu series. I mean Xander is already super 4 and gohan is still super 3 so they should take Buu out easy. Anyway it is something to think about

Ah, my bad. Given the general nature of the content of the chapter, though, it's hardly surprising my mind misinterpreted your intentions with the "do her sister's ass too" sentence.

Considering some of the stuff I've written I never thought I'd say this, but I could really do without half of the sexual stuff you seem to be intent on cramming into your work. I'll admit to taking part in a little PWP fun here and there, although most of my stuff does tend to be part of the plot, but it's never good when people can yawn, and hit page down a few times until the next scene starts, and not miss any events that would impact their knowledge of the story.

The ass-fucking thoughts on Buffy's part didn't do anything for the story nor did they seem natural to the character, and until her tryst with Spike, we never saw her as an especially sexual person. Xander and Anya are really the only two people in BtVS (Anya more-so than Xander) I can see going at it frequently just for the hell of it; with most anyone else it just feels forced.

In the entire chapter 'ass' is not once on its own. In the entire chapter 'butt' does not once appear. In the entire chapter 'fuck', does not appear, not even as an expletive. What the FUCK are you talking about?