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Review of chapter "We all fall down" from Saphrine
Review:
great first 2 chapters looking foward to more
Review By [Saphrine] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We all fall down" from VillageOrchid
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Thanks for continuing the story. Looking forward to seeing how you develop it more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We all fall down" from Sandi
Review:
This is an interesting idea but what about the ones who appeared? That sounds very interesting.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We all fall down" from unicornzvi
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Very nice concept and I like the story so far. However:
- A walkie talkie will be unlikely to recieve anything in the middle of a modern city, much less in antartica since it's short ranged on on a very specific (and inherently short ranged) frequency. A transistor radio, or one of the hand held ham frequency radio trancievers would recieve something as long as there was something to recieve.

-The static wouldn't be constant and unchanging since the natural processes which cause static (lightning, sun spots, etc...) aren't constant and unchanging.

-you can't get a sufficent spark to start a fire from a walkie talkie or other hand held radio transciver battery. On the other hand if Xander knows what he's doing he can get a (relativly) high voltage spark from the final stage of the transmiter. This however would require either something which works as a screw driver (the knife might do if it's a small thin knife) or destroying the radio in order to turn it into a spark maker).

-If Willow can cast glamours why can't she create enough light for them to continue working after dark?

In spite of the above I really liked the story so far and am waiting (im)patinatly for the next chapter.

P.S
One problem with sending people so far back in time is that there are many ideas which weren't implemented for years simply because no one thought of them a partial list of ones Xander and/or Willow will know of are:
-farming
-domesticating animals
-planned breeding of domesticated animals
-riding horses
-stirrups
-smoking out bees to get honey
-cloth wicks to make lamps
-wax candles
-bow&arrow (much better than a throwing spear, even with an atlatel)
-lighting fire with flint and steel/iron/iron ore(particularly iron pyrex)

There are many more but you get the picture. I hope you take that into concideration as you keep writing the story.

The Unicorn
Review By [unicornzvi] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We all fall down" from Lilly
Review:
very promising start. will be checking back for updates :D
Review By [Lilly] • Date [24 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We all fall down" from Stacia
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Hmm, things are starting to get interesting. Please don't change anything because of my guesses. I've got another one, and I feel like I'm going to sprain something if I don't ask, but I'll try to restrain myself in the future. The W/X pairing makes sense for the jumping off point that you chose. I look forward to how you'll evovle that relationship over thousands of years. Speaking of time, wow, they're nearly 5500 years in the past. That would make them a contemporary of, or possibly older than Methos. Is he going to lose the title of Oldest Immortal? Somehow, I don't think he'd mind. *grin*

Will you be telling the story chronologically, or skipping back and forth between the past (newly Immortal W and X) and the present (Really Old W and X)? Oh, nevermind, I'll find out.
Review By [Stacia] • Date [23 Sep 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We all fall down" from Hecatonchires
Review:
Interesting start
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [23 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from Alltorian
Review:
Very, very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE keep up the good work and update soon.
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [22 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from Alltorian
Review:
Very, very interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter. PLEASE keep up the good work nad update soon
Review By [Alltorian] • Date [22 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from Stacia
Review:
Interesting beginning. Kinda short, I'd call it a teaser. Between the author's notes, and the actual story, this was my impression: Anyanka's manipulation of Cordy's wish sent Willow and Xander back in time and made them Immortal. From the title, I would guess that they went back several thousand years and they either knew or joined the Horsemen. Then they reappeared in the present, but with thousands of years of experience under their belts.

Am I reaching too far? I think this idea has a lot of potential and I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
Review By [Stacia] • Date [21 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from zili
Review:
awwww i wanted to know what happened next
Review By [zili] • Date [21 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Okay - this could be fun either a combo of personalities and experiences with Willow and Xander's relatively shorter lives putting their personalite behind Duncan?/Amanda? and Methos, or a whole magical quantum leap thing where Xander and Willow's abilities and consciousness are switched into other dimensonal bodies. Looking forward to how this plays out/more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from MBB
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Nice idea, and pretty bad wish - although I can't see them start hating each other for at least the first few centuries. :-)

But why do you have them forget/change who they are? The purpose of having Willow and Xander in the fic is to have characters with their memories, character and identity, right?
Review By [MBB] • Date [21 Sep 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from Karie
Review:
Looks promising =) Good work!
Review By [Karie] • Date [21 Sep 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There And Back Again The Horsemen's Tale" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Promising start. I look forward for more! :-)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [21 Sep 05] • Not Rated
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