Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Cristina
Nice chapter. Soo what will hapen next?
Review By [Cristina
] • Date [16 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from Locathah
I'm a bit confused as to why Crane would be, well, sane again for starters. But beyond that at the end of Batman Begins he was a fugitive from the police.
Review By [Locathah
] • Date [13 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of story "Where Fear Blooms" from VillageOrchid
So far about 70 percent of the storytelling has been very clear with some good charcterization moments and dialog, and your phsysical descriptions of the character's environments have helped to bring that clarity on a 60/40 basis. So I'm saying there's quite a bit about the story that interests me, but also quite a bit that comes across as a little confusing. I understand you want Scarcrow to be confused, but his scenes with Drusilla have come across to me as a combination of lecturing and confused moments. I hope you find this feedback helpful, and I will continue to "tune" in to your story for a while, should you decide to continue it. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Your critique was very helpful and not taken any other way. I've pulled the chapter and took a step back. Under my real pen name, I write humor. This is me trying to stretch. And me saying, thank you.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [13 Oct 05] • Rating [6 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from Charlotte
Great start! I like this xover. hope we see more.
Review By [Charlotte
] • Date [11 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from azulkan
Very interesting. I liked it.
Review By [azulkan
] • Date [11 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from Jicky
Interesting. I really would like to see where this is going.
Review By [Jicky
] • Date [11 Oct 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from Kirallie
Great start!!!!! Will Batman believe them? Will any other Buffy characters appear? Poor Dawn, she will end up with a complex. Keep going!!
Review By [Kirallie
] • Date [10 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from ranlynn
Nice start you've got here. It's always fun to see Dru at her psychotic best.
And mysteries... Is Ras a demon? In the comics he owes his long life to something called the 'Lazarus Pool' where he can regenerate if he grows old or is to injured heal on his own.
It'll be fun to see which direction you take.
Review By [ranlynn
] • Date [10 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where Fear Blooms" from banner
Review By [banner
] • Date [10 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]