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Review of chapter "Part 3" from Wormbait
Review:
Huh three chapters in and nobody has wondered what happened to Willow? Even Xander, her best friend?

And I'm supprised to see you bothered to bring back Buffy, bit pointless with Xander there, especially with the now aged wonder Dawn for the love interestAnd his vision of being effected by a Gou'ld (SP?) device seems silly whan he shrugged off the attacks of a few battleships.

A pitty because I really liked you actual writing style and the plot was good but it just seemed to go too extreme, both in supering up some people and getting rid of others.
Comments from author:
I didn't realize when I posted this that I hadn't specifically addressed the fact that Dawn had discovered Willow and Cordy's bodies during her search for Buffy. I'll need to revise that part of the story and make note of that.

There is much more involved in bringing Buffy brought back that will be addressed in a future story in this 'verse.

And that wasn't a Gou'ald device that Xander saw in his vision, as you'll see in a future story. While Xander might seem to be really souped up, he still has some quite significant weaknesses that leave him vulnerable to the various demons and other big bads that seem to collect around a Hellmouth.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [15 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting. I wonder how long Anise goes in this universe before coming to a well deserved very bad end? The story is good but I would have liked you to take it a little further and explore the Dawn situation.
Comments from author:
Dawn's, Buffy's and Xander's situations will all be explored in upcoming stories.

And since Anise is quite annoying and should be used to prove Darwin's theory that only the fittest survive, she will probably have a fatal accident with either a backed-up toilet or a meat grinder in the near future, I think. ;-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from konniemacian
Review:
Oh i loved it is there going to be a sequal? PLEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
I'm currently considering various ideas for how to best follow this up.
Review By [konniemacian] • Date [1 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 3" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Wow. Great chapters. Good to see that Buffy is healing.
Very interesting way to show Anise is rather bad. To talk like this is nearly Goa'uld standard.
Can't await to read more of this. I wonder how Xander's new abilities will be used. Him fighting demons and vampires with power to destroy starships would be overkill, I say. ;-)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

Anise is NOT of the nicer people in the SG1 universe, and I have depicted her accordingly.

As far as Xander's power level goes, he does have several weaknesses and they will be revealed in upcoming stories.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [6 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Wow! This is one dense story. There is so much going on so quickly I've lost some people and plot points. Have the Scoobies discovered what happened to Cordy and Willow? Do they know the Chaos Warlock was Ripper's old buddy? I look forward to your updates to this story with great anticipation. Great story, write faster. Lol!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

Xander, Giles, Joyce and Dawn do kow that Willow is dead; as far as anything else is concerned, that will be revealed in future stories.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is an extremely interesting fic. I look forward to seeing what happens next and to finding out what happened to the others. Obviously Willow is dead and Dawn changed, but what about Buffy and Cordy, did they survive their injuries?


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying it. That wil be revealed in the next part.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from DeeRose
Review:
hmmm... interesting start. Clearly Cordy is dead, but what about Buffy and Willow? excited to see where you take this fic.
Comments from author:
The girls' fates will be revealed in the next chapter.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 2" from banner
Review:
* looks pathetic *
Ummm... not that I'm really really pleased at having Sg-1 there, but, you know, What About Buffy, Willow, and Dawn? (assuming Cordy IS dead.)


Loving this story, by the way...
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you're enjoying it. Have to wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 2" from Nairojam
Review:
I love Rifts, Xander, and Cosmo-Knights, and so my first reaction to the story is COOL!! Poor Dawnie had a couple of years added to her age, and is most likely a Slayer? I suspect B may still be alive, as some portion of the Slayer healing should have been left active... Is Will A Vamp?
Comments from author:
All of the changes and some of the consequences will be seen in the next chapter.
Review By [Nairojam] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star Knight, Star Bright" from Nairojam
Review:
Very interesting way to start it out. Hmm, if I didn't know better (and I don't) it almost looks like you are setting it up to cut Xander's ties with Sunnydale, so he can run (fly) off, and go planet hopping with the SGC...
Comments from author:
No, OI can safely say that Xander is still going to be hanging around Sunnydale, especially once he learns about the changes in Dawn and Joyce's lives.

Which is not to say that SG-1 won't be dropping by to say 'Hi!"

John
Review By [Nairojam] • Date [31 Oct 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star Knight, Star Bright" from banner
Review:
Whoa!
Wha-
Huh?
Oh please don't stop THERE!
Comments from author:
I won't. Chapter 2 should be up in a few days.
Review By [banner] • Date [31 Oct 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Star Knight, Star Bright" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Uhuh. Intriguing way to start a BtVS story. *grin* By killing at least Cordelia, Willow and Buffy?! ;-) But it's great to have Dawn there (yet?)!
I wonder and can't await to see what will happen if the spell ends with Xander in space?
Comments from author:
You'l find out what some of the consequences of the spell are in the next chapter.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [31 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star Knight, Star Bright" from Caliadragon
Review:
Oh my God! Willow, Buffy, and Cordy are all injured or dead. I can't believe it. Xander and Dawn are going to be shattered when they come back to themselves. While Joyce and Giles are going to be broken up as well. I really can't wait to see what happens next.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Well, I warned you there was going to be character deaths, didn't I? ;-)

All I can say is that there will be even more changes coming up i the next two chapters.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Oct 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Star Knight, Star Bright" from CPTSkip
Review:
Now this was an interesting start. But dude! You just slaughtered most of the Scoobies! I can't wait to see where you go from here. Lol!
Comments from author:
Glad you found it interesting. More new developments coming up next chapter.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Oct 05] • Not Rated
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