More please! I have really enjoyed this and hope you continue it at some point... You have brought the SGC to Sunnydale just in time to prep for Graduation Day...

I can see a very different fight happening there...

Xander is, in fact, following SOP where it comes to military spouses. Hathor is, when it gets down to brass tacks, his wife. (Common-law, but still wife.) They have a son. Leaving his grandfather out of the mix, Xander is a military officer in the USAF (though the rules would be no different if he were enlisted), he is basically going up the chain of command (Xander's immediate boss is NOT his grandfather, but Maj. Davis. Col. Maybourne is NID liaison, but is NOT in the chain of command of either Xander OR Maj. Davis, though he outranks Davis. Maj. Davis reports to Col. O'Neill who is dual-hatted as OIC, SG-1 and XO of the entire SGC. That's why, surprisingly, Maybourne is not as upset as you would think - THIS Maybourne, unlike the canon one, has his head screwed on pretty straight.) - which will makes sure every I is dotted, and every T crossed.

You started out with a few bobbles but improved steadily chapter by chapter. The premise was sound and the humor was engaging. This is a sound piece of work with a lot of promise. Please, continue it.

Loved the story would definitly like to see more.

This is a very interesting story. It's a shame that it hasn't had an update in so many years. Just happy to have read what you did post! Thanks for this.

Really good story

I just found this story. Very interesting ... its a lot of fun. Nice Xander story. But you haven't updated in some time. Any chance you will continue the story. Looks like the X man gets his pack back.

Kyle DuFours
Rhonda Kelley
Tor Hauer
Heidi Barrie

http://buffy.wikia.com/wiki/The_Pack

Cool. Pity you haven't continued on htis, your writing is witty, intriguing, good with both drama and action (though the fights could be slightly more... Elabourate), overall, very nice.

This is a quite excellent fic and I'm sorry to have seen the end of it - however the latter chapters had become very predictable; Kinsey really wasn't as smart as portrayed in the fic and I found it very disturbing how easy you had the very total takeover of the SGC by Kinsey and his goons established.

Overall I enjoyed the story, but frankly much like the show you based it on it had some major flaws. Namely the fact that a mountain full of black ops people didn't deal with threats to the world effectively, mainly because the writers wanted to draw out the BS. I just can't see how Kinsey and the various others were allowed to progress in the manner they did.

I also don't get the idea that the President would remove all the folks from the SGC and turn it over to the NiD when the connections came to the forefront. Especially with the various mercenaries and whatnot there who would have talked under interrogation as to who hired them and such. I know you were setting up a larger Sunnydale plotline with it and wanted the SGC cast there - but many of the people you took out from under the mountain couldn't logically have been replaced and almost none of them were even remotely a security risk.

I can't agree with that as a plot line, and your fight scenes could use some serious work in the earlier parts beginning with Boston that came to light intensely. Your story was well written although disjointed in several places before that and afterward, I'd like to see it continued but I'd really like to see the world not end from the Space front as well.

Please update I would love to know how this ends.

I love the story. I have to wonder though why everyone in SG-1 is accepting this so easily, as they were told about things and they as the military really have no practical experience in this. I have to ask why is this unfinished?

Great story. I can only hope you will continue. Keep up the good work.

You write such epic stories, and I love to read them, but you seem to only get about halfway through most of them before wandering off to other stories! Please, for the love of all your readers, return and finish some of them!

great story can't wait for more

Interesting story, I'd like to see where it goes if you decide to continue it. Seems awful strange that all of SGC would be removed to Sunnyhell and Kinsey acquired control of the Stargate when SGC averted a foothold situation. If that isn't what happened it sure seemed it considering the Initiative/NID angle and senator Kinsey's involvement with the rogue NID...

Somehow it seems that in most of these stories favors and such on the part of the good guys don't get called in... *shrugs* Good work.