I SO want dreamfall to continue to write this most AWESOME story!!! I want to read of Xander working with the council to make it a better organization! And I want them to help heal Xander. Again, the author has this amazing piece going on here!!!

Heh, this is a pretty good fic, even though it looks to have been quite a while since it's been updated.

Please finish! Please!

This is great - the characters are so well written, the story arc is so well thought out - and I was actually laughing out loud at one point. Thanks.

Rats. I'm sad that I reached the end. I hope you write more soon and get it posted.

Love the story. Looking forward to Xander and Mal's interactions. And Simon's as he's forced to come to terms with demons and other things that go bump in the night.

And, of course, the Xander/River romance :-)

Thanks for the story. Looking forward to the rest!

Tom A.

Poor Xander. I think you hurt him more than he got it (except for the eye) when he was hanging around Buffy. You big meanie.

One problem with your writing -- you don't always give enough information on who is talking. Just something to watch for.

Thanks for the story.

Tom A.

Foreshadowing - your clue to good literature. - Milo Bloom

Love the story. Love how Xander isn't giving anything away.

It always annoys me that the crew have a source of knowledge about the future and they don't _use_ River. At least they asked some questions here, but still - seems like they could get a lot more information out of her.

Anyway, enjoying the story. Thanks for writing it.

Tom A.

This story is fantastic. I think that you are doing a great job with the characters, they all feel like the same ones I've known and loved from the shows. I hope that you are able to continue posting updates. I read what was available a year or more ago and then forgot all about it. When I happened upon it again I was so happy to find new material. Not remembering where I was in the story I re-read most of it and only registered to make this review/plea.

Please find the time to update this story, it is one of the best I have read -it doesn't hurt that I love the character of Xander.

Thank you for the wonderful story so far.

Merry Christmas, and to all a good life. Prayers for a update are always included.

I am waiting for an update!!
*taps fingernails menacingly*

I'm sooo enjoying this! Though my heart aches for lonely!Xander. You've portrayed him so well, and every time he thinks of Willow my eyes get all teary right along with his. I hope the crew doesn't give him too hard of a time about it all, and I really hope he gets his axe back for some reason. I'm also glad you didn't make River into a Slayer, girl has enough problems. All in all I think this is just great!

Awesome characterization and a fantastic way to merge the two worlds. Really looking forward to seeing where you're going with this. Hoping for an update soon!

tehe I love this chapter!! It doesn't matter where Xander goes the girls all love him :p
Even if its different types of love.. Great story!

I'm so glad to know this story isn't abandoned -- it's a favorite of mine.

I love this! Can't wait for the next chapter.