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Review of chapter "Pandora's Box" from agnar
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I was liking this until these last 2 chapters, then you lost me. Sorry but Mal took fucking JAYNE back into his crew after he ACTUALLY sold river and simon out to the alliance. So this ridiculous over reaction to River saying Xander is getting ready for 'daddy's' arrival, which is EXACTLY what the rest of the fucking crew is doing?

It's entirely out of character and messes up your fic entirely. It doesn't work. It was good work til these last 2 chapters though.
Review By [agnar] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story, I hope you continue it!

Tom.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [6 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All But One" from DieselDriver
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That was pretty darned chickensh*t of Mal.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bouncing Bullets" from DieselDriver
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Ok, worse than dinosaur embryos... Yeah, was going to say what but not. That would be a spoiler if someone was to read the reviews first.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "They're Not Cows" from DieselDriver
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Hmmm. Wonder what's really in those crates? Maybe dinosaur embryos?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sound of Falling Engines" from DieselDriver
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Hey! A pilot's gotta solo sometime. :-)
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Offer" from DieselDriver
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I really like this story and I think I've figured out one of Xander's attractions to me. My favorite person in all of history and time was a carpenter and died on a cross to save us all from our sins. Given that Xander doesn't hold a candle to being Jesus, still they have that in common.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [14 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from notWorthy
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I'm really liking this story.

I can't wait to see Xander giving mini seminars on the various demons. I can just picture him leading them through a city pointing out the various friendly demons and totally blowing their minds. Or telling them all the weird ways to kill certain demons.

I wouldn't imagine they'd be interested in slaying, but I could definitely see them insisting he tell them the ways to recognize and defeat the most common.

I'd like to see him meet someone he knew before. It'd have to be a bad guy or reformed bad guy, but just someone that they would recognize each other and who was awake all that time to tell Xander what happened to everyone.
Review By [notWorthy] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from Spica
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First "Xander/Scoobie in space" fic that i found to be really good, hope you finish it sometime.
Review By [Spica] • Date [4 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from DrDamage
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I'd really like to see more of this
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [16 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from eriktheviking
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Still a worthwhile reread, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [31 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from Zorgdub
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This story is splendidly written. Once I had started, I just couldn't stop. I kept reading until it was all finished, and now I feel sad that there isn't more...

I hope you come back to it, one day.
Review By [Zorgdub] • Date [16 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Gift" from Shayna
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This is a really good story and I find myself enjoying it, even though I don't like firefly all that much... regarding that part about a story about dinosaurs in the end of the chapter, was it Jurassic park?
Review By [Shayna] • Date [17 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Sedation and Other Options" from DarkFaerieYumi
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I missed this. So awesome.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [7 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Couple Drinks" from SewperJew
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Thank you for this. This is why I read fanfiction. The characters are spot on. Love it.
Review By [SewperJew] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Not Rated
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