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Review of chapter "Familiar Stranger" from banner
Review:
Oops. I forgot about that little complication. Oh, well, once X wakes up, Book can explain that Mal is about as far from clerical as it's possible to get...
Comments from author:
Ah... except that it's post-show, post-comics, and Book is no longer aboard...
Review By [banner] • Date [5 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Scars" from ElaineRhodes
Review:
Chs 1-4

Very enjoyable story so far. I'm almost afraid for Mal, though - who knows how Xander will react to someone who's a dead ringer for Caleb!

Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
*smile* You noticed that, too, huh? Yeah, next couple chapters go into that a bit. Let me know if they live up to expectation! Thanks for the review!
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [5 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Scars" from Caliadragon
Review:
This is an excellent fic and I loved their reactions to Xander's scars.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad that worked. I figure they've seen some pretty messed up people over the years, but demon fighters come up with some unusual sorts of wounds...
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Scars" from Lucinda
Review:
oh, Xander mingling with the Serenity crew... I look forward to seeing more. Between the fight and the scars, he should at least get some respect from probably everyone but River - who knows how to predict River's reactions? Some from Simon for pure survival/luck, but the rest all appreciate a tough and determined fighter, even if that fighter's on the other side.
Comments from author:
Yeah, in a lot of ways he's a lot like them, although a bit more willing to admit he's guided by conscience and morals. I think he'll get along okay with 'em. And as for River -- River's fun *grin*
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Scars" from banner
Review:
This story is great. Everyone is perfectly in character.
Comments from author:
Thanks -- glad I've still got 'em, thus far!
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from banner
Review:
Great start - everyone is Perfectly in character, and the framework works really really well...
Comments from author:
Thanks! It's my first Firefly story, so good to hear that so far my portrayals are working out. Glad you're enjoying it, and hope it continues to work for you!
Review By [banner] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from Rivana
Review:
This is really starting out interesting. Looking forward to more and a bit of back story.
Comments from author:
Thanks! The back story will come kind of gradually, and it might be a bit, but it will show up. The summary says a bit too much that way, maybe, but I couldn't think of anything else to say that sounded even remotely readable. "The Firefly crew stumbles across a man with a questionable past" just sounds so cliche:p
Review By [Rivana] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from Thewander
Review:
great job, can not wait til Xander is back at the ship, think he and river will get along very well, would be the only one that doesnt think he is crazy
Comments from author:
Thanks! Oh yeah, I have a couple good (at least in my opinion) River - Xander interactions. Psychics are fun, after all!
Review By [Thewander] • Date [4 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from Caliadragon
Review:
This looks to be a very interesting fic and I look forward to seeing how the crew reacts to Xander.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks! Hope their reactions live up to expectation!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from Teldra
Review:
Lovely so far, looking forward to more. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, more will be up shortly!
Review By [Teldra] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from superbrutal
Review:
I don't know to much about Firefly except for the few shows and the movie that I saw.

But I really would like to see some more, please continue.
Comments from author:
This takes place before the movie, but the characters are more or less the same. Glad you're enjoying it despite not having seen the show!
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from Tjin
Review:
I Like this story, PLEASE Continue it.

if you get any complaints let me know who it is and i'll chase them down with a wiffle bat.
Comments from author:
I will definitely be continuing. No sign of complaints thus far -- is there something particular that looks complaint-worthy, or am I just getting paranoid? Thanks for the offer!
Review By [Tjin] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool continuation of the previous scene. Leaves me wanting more. Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Usually I have the chapters a little more self-contained, but what with feeding the prompts, it does have rather abrupt breaks in between, which does lend itself rather well to cliffhangers *laugh* Glad you're liking it, and hope you continue to enjoy!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talkin' Nonesense" from zili
Review:
this story sounds really really interesting i can't wait to see what happens next
Comments from author:
*grin* You won't have to wait very long -- it's coming. Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [zili] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Couple Drinks" from SamDragon
Review:
Poor Xander.Always with the bad luck.Next chapter please. :)
Comments from author:
Yeah, he does tend to get beat up, but it's something that he always winds up getting up again, at least! Next one will come soon. Probably two at once, cuz the next one wound up itty-bitty thanks to the prompts.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [3 Nov 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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