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Review of chapter "College Days - Part One" from Sahugani
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Please can we really watch Rodney's head explode? Pretty please?

love the story so far. I loved the Giles discworld L-space quips by the way.
Keep it coming!
Review By [Sahugani] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Fyrloche
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First, let me say that this is a very entertaining piece of work. I have been reading it and the prequel for the last week. The two of them put together make for a very long read. (Over 1000 pages!) I think that it is safe to say that I like it. I caught on to the fact that you're from Great Britain fairly quickly. The fact that you're from Wales took a little longer. Congratulations on getting married. Hopefully, you are still on your honeymoon. (I've been married 22 yrs and the honeymoon still shows up on occasion.) I like all the pop culture references but I have to admit that while I could tell you had done one, British pop culture is not my strong point. I did recognize 'Danger Mouse' and the Wizard and orangutan seemed familiar, but I couldn't quite place them. I think you even had a Judge Dredd reference in there somewhere. (Loved the comic. Hated what the American film industry did to it. Stallone is NOT Dredd material.) The other hints are too numerous to write about.

The assassin seems to be hints of Mara Jade. *snorts* Will she end up being Xander's love interest or will she just be the ignition point for a Xander/Faith pairing?

Loved the Yoda scene. (I know I'm rambling, but that's what happens when there is so much to remember to say when you read a whole story before reviewing.)

The scene when the Jaffa find out that Xander is a Jedi is priceless. I really can't wait to see a full conversation between them and him. It should be very entertaining. Can you imagine a Jaffa Jedi? Or an Asgardian? Could you imagine the look on Teal'c's face if his son where force sensitive?

And that's it, for now. My brain has decided to shut down now. There are a lot of things about this story that I like and I look forward to more of it.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from (Past Donor)James
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Liking this story. More soon please.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from lindiel
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Didn't I read this like a month ago on FF.net? Anyway, liked the chappy, even if it was a re-read. I especially liked SG1's briefing...
Review By [lindiel] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Elleria
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Love this. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Inquisitor
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when the us military&government approach Xander in regards of any imperial technologies, he should demand the royalties in the use of his patents...most likely the corporations behind the Trust are going to greatly benefit monetarily on any techs derived from imperial tech...

the energy cell alone could had disrupted the entire energy&petroleum industry...the reason why any energy production system is impractical is because that any excess energy produced can't be stored for a longer period of time...like solar power, it's useless after dark...with the energy cell, the solar industry or even electric cars can be now be a reality...

in the end, Xander would be in a position to be like Tesla to revolutionize the power industry that could potentially make him the richest man on the planet...i'm sure Anya would gladly help him in managing his money...i think he should also ask not to pay any taxes just like Harry Stamper's crew in Armageddon...hopefully this aspect of the story wouldn't be ignored...
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Thank you! I was so afraid Lindsay was going fall off the dark side wagon...

Loved Daniel carefully not saying what was on his mind at the briefing. And Bra'tac's approach to subtlty... :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from LordCorwin
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Nicely done .... thanks for the update.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Rebelgirl
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I loved Bra'tac's sense of timing! That was sweet.

This story is getting better and better.

Cushty!
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Ansku
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Brilliant two chapters :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Oh dear. Nasty cliffie you've got there! Really hope you update again soon... pretty please :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from CPTSkip
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I just finished rereading your whole epic for the ... mumble ... time and just want to say: "You rock dude!" OK, possibly I could have phrased that a bit more elegantly, but I hope you get the idea. Not only do you write excellent dialog and seem to have captured all the major characters' personalities perfectly, but your plot is fantastic. You left so many tangled plot lines at the end of this update, I really hope you update soon or I will contact the Order of Tenaka or however it is spelled. Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us and I look forward to more updates with much anticipation.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from Dragonelf
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“Oh hell. I wonder if Harris outranks Hammond?”

::Giggles insanely::

Olorin, isn't that one of the names Gandalf did use?

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from DrDamage
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damn, this tale is beyond cool.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "College Days - Part One" from Bilbert
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This is one of my favorite series. Thank you for all your hard work!

“OK, so, Olorin? Am I totally spazzing, or is that one of the names that Radagast uses in Lord of the Rings?”

Gandalf - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olorin
Review By [Bilbert] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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