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Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Elleria
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Love this. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Inquisitor
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when the us military&government approach Xander in regards of any imperial technologies, he should demand the royalties in the use of his patents...most likely the corporations behind the Trust are going to greatly benefit monetarily on any techs derived from imperial tech...

the energy cell alone could had disrupted the entire energy&petroleum industry...the reason why any energy production system is impractical is because that any excess energy produced can't be stored for a longer period of time...like solar power, it's useless after dark...with the energy cell, the solar industry or even electric cars can be now be a reality...

in the end, Xander would be in a position to be like Tesla to revolutionize the power industry that could potentially make him the richest man on the planet...i'm sure Anya would gladly help him in managing his money...i think he should also ask not to pay any taxes just like Harry Stamper's crew in Armageddon...hopefully this aspect of the story wouldn't be ignored...
Review By [Inquisitor] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Thank you! I was so afraid Lindsay was going fall off the dark side wagon...

Loved Daniel carefully not saying what was on his mind at the briefing. And Bra'tac's approach to subtlty... :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from LordCorwin
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Nicely done .... thanks for the update.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Rebelgirl
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I loved Bra'tac's sense of timing! That was sweet.

This story is getting better and better.

Cushty!
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shambling Towards Bethlehem..." from Ansku
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Brilliant two chapters :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Oh dear. Nasty cliffie you've got there! Really hope you update again soon... pretty please :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from CPTSkip
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I just finished rereading your whole epic for the ... mumble ... time and just want to say: "You rock dude!" OK, possibly I could have phrased that a bit more elegantly, but I hope you get the idea. Not only do you write excellent dialog and seem to have captured all the major characters' personalities perfectly, but your plot is fantastic. You left so many tangled plot lines at the end of this update, I really hope you update soon or I will contact the Order of Tenaka or however it is spelled. Thanks for sharing your wonderful story with us and I look forward to more updates with much anticipation.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from Dragonelf
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“Oh hell. I wonder if Harris outranks Hammond?”

::Giggles insanely::

Olorin, isn't that one of the names Gandalf did use?

::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from DrDamage
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damn, this tale is beyond cool.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "College Days - Part One" from Bilbert
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This is one of my favorite series. Thank you for all your hard work!

“OK, so, Olorin? Am I totally spazzing, or is that one of the names that Radagast uses in Lord of the Rings?”

Gandalf - http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Olorin
Review By [Bilbert] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from lindiel
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OK, so, Olorin? Am I totally spazzing, or is that one of the names that Radagast uses in Lord of the Rings?
Review By [lindiel] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from jupitersdaughter
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First, I'm thanking you for winning me a meal at Outback. I bet my friends on a few things that world happen, and they did, so I get free food.

I love Olorin's mutterings about not having smoked so much and never wearing a robe. Do we get to meet his friends? Jedi Daniel kicks ass!! And me thinks Holland is going to regret kicking the Sunnydale bee hive...

Wonderful story!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And What Rough Beast Is this...." from Satori
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Is there some significance two your chapter titles being the verses of a poem by William Butler Yeats?

perhaps something
... Slouches toward Bethlehem?
Review By [Satori] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Anarchy Is Not Loosed - Part Two" from lorwen
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Story is TRULY awesome.
Need more story.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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