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Review of chapter "Blood" from DarkTopaz
intresting to see the fallout back in Xander's universe
Comments from author:
~blinks, thinks,blinks again~ you know I did not even think of that.. and lisaroquin did cover that in her Tales of the Zeppo series.. but... nah.. for the most part that universe probably won't really ever be a factor again... but... hmm.. maybe offer that up to someone who wants to write it? right now not really anyone (besides andrew.. yuck) who would be reading the comics.
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
A very interesting tack to take, questioning Batman and Superman's morals against killing. I've often wondered the same thing about the Joker myself; if Batman had killed him early on, Jason Todd (the second Robin) would most probably still be alive. Superman has never seemed as against killing as Batman, though; in some cases Batman has even had to talk him out of killing people (most notably Lex Luthor).
Comments from author:
ooh.. I could have brought Jason into the mix, or Barbara being able to walk.. but.. see I have never seen superman willing to kill.. now granted I do not follow every single comic line.. so... ~shrugs~
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood" from Kirallie
Great chapter, loved it!! Can't wait to find out what Artemis meant. Go Xander, standing up to them like that!! Keep up the great work!!!!
Comments from author:
thanks.. I am trying...
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood" from VillageOrchid
Good stuff. Worth dramatizing. Do I need to re-read to figure out where the slayers are now? Are they being collected? Are they waiting to start an initiative to invite them for training until after the building is finished?
Comments from author:
I have not started yet.. that is what the next chapter starts doing.. where and who are they...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood" from Rob
A very good part. Xander has a good argument, but it probably should be up to the courts to kill the Joker and the others. Of course in the comics that can't happen. The question is why isn't it happening here? Who controls this universe, DC or something else?

Comments from author:
~laughs~ yeah.. imagine that.. a death penalty.. but working within the rules of this universe for some reason Gotham doesn't have one.. and some of the bad guys I am not sure traditional methods would kill... but this is a question of responsibility... ~girns~
Review By [Rob] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood" from JasonBarnett
Of course there's the whole what do they do when killing becomes to easy. For example when Batman decides it's easier to just snap a guy's neck rather than taking him down. I'm talking just an everyday criminal, someone who may be down on his luck, not a supervillain.
Comments from author:
It is, and would be... but isn't that what a hero is.. the one who does the right thing, even when it would be so much easier to do the wrong?
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [13 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Settling In" from JayCee
I am only giving this a 8 as for it to be a 10 it would have to be more... so when can we expect the next chapter. I truly love this story. I have always loved Xander best. To me he is the hero. I love that he is able to shake up batman's demeanor. I have never liked batman and with what has just recently happened with the omac story. I truly blame batman for being so friggin paranoid. He is the one ultimately responsible for those people dying on paradise island. No one else. Anyway I hope to read more soon as this is the 2nd time I have read this story. Take care. JC
Comments from author:
Believe it or not I have the third chapter about half done.. just not sure if I like the way it is going so it has stalled... I don't know if I want to follow what he is going to become, or scrap the entire idea.... wanna beta it and give me feedback?
Review By [JayCee] • Date [7 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling In" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Great story, i hope you continue this series
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [28 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling In" from banner
I'm really enjoying this. I haven't read comic books in a long time (and wasn't much of a fan even then,) but this is interesting and accessible even to non-experts. Great job.
Review By [banner] • Date [19 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Settling In" from APS
Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [9 Mar 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling In" from TorturedAngel
Yay cant have a Joss world without Shrimp! hahaha I loved that! Great fic, please continue! :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [15 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling In" from Kirallie
Yeah!!! You updated!!!! Cool chapter, liked the flashback explanation of how everything got as bad as it did. Will he meet anymore of the batclan? Why is he the only Xander still around? More soon please!!!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling In" from ashez
Well, the characterizations seem fine now, Xander seems to be IC. I guess you just had some beef with Buffy.... Going so overboard in the first chapter is probably going to turn some people off of the fic though. You might want to reconsider it... It's your fic though, your decision.
Comments from author:
Ashez - you are totally right about the Buffy bashing, but if you look at my other fics, normally I set her on the path of being better, but my inital purpose in this fic was to write how BUffy and Willow could get so out of control that Xander was willing to leave and not look back. I normally don't like destroying characters like that, but in this case I wanted to see if I could realistically send her down a path that Xander would not be willing to stay with her during.

Promise don't really like completely bashing characters, though Buffy is not my fav.
Review By [ashez] • Date [12 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from ashez
Ok you're going waaaaay overboard with the Buffy hatred here. Even Stalin Buffy of season seven isn't this bad. Especially the comment about the younger slayers servicing him was out of line... The situation doesn't have to be taken to such an extreme to get Xander to plausibley leave.
Review By [ashez] • Date [12 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Settling In" from Gnome
This is a great story! I was never a huge follower of DC (although I know all the Characters so far) but I'm loving this! Please keep up the wonderful work!
Review By [Gnome] • Date [12 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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