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Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Highly entertaining, thank you. Nice to see bitchy-Buffy and -Willow getting their come-uppance
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [13 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from (Past Donor)AmarinRose
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A very, very interesting crossover. I like the spotlighting of Xander, and the realization that Buffy/Willow *could* go bad with all the power they'd have now -- though I think that the parts about whores and 'servicing' were a bit over the top. I like Xander's realization of 'Dude, I'm in DC Comics!' and you did a *fantastic* job on Etrigan's rhymes. Hope you update soon!
Review By [(Past Donor)AmarinRose] • Date [19 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from SamDragon
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The story has great potential.
Now the bad,need some help with the sentence structure and spelling.
All in all would like more of this story.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from Lucinda
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While I am saddened to see such bitter and unlikable Buffy and Willow portrayals, I can't help but agree that it could have developed after the seasosns that should never have been. It was so amusing to picture the expressions and reactions of the greeting party, and I find myself wondering if anyone stopped Xander from cracking his head on the floor.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from jackattack
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More, please.
Review By [jackattack] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from Kirallie
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Great start!!!!!! Poor xander!!!! What'll happen when he wakes up? Can't wait for more!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from Zakhynsia
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very cool-please continue on with it. i'd like to see what happens next. i loved your ending"because youre comic book characters and im a geek" funny as heck
Review By [Zakhynsia] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from TimeTwist
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Interesting concept, and I definitely liked it but a few nits.

First Batman and Superman both wouldn't be surprised that vampires exist. Both had fought them several times. Heck, Dracula has shown up many times in many different comic books including DC and Marvel both. Wonder Woman definitely has fought them.

Also, there really is no reason for Xander to be called to teach them. The Amazons would be best equipped to teach and train them. There are other valid reasons for Xander to be called, including the fact that he is the one who sees, and knows quite a lot about the slayers, probably more so than most except for Rupert Giles.

Buffy was way out of character at this point in the series. Sure she was arrogant, but had been brought down a peg or two by the end of the series. In fact she would be the one more likely to be run over and not Xander. By this point in time I doubt any of the people who know him, Buffy, Faith and Giles in particular would ever consider him a weakling at this point, or one needed protecting. The younger slayers maybe, but not those who knew him for a while.

Now for some positives.

Xander's actions in this story were mostly within character at this point in the series, although Xander's reaction to Cecily was a little extreme, but still within character. He definitely would be the worst enemy for the slayers if he ever switched sides. And Xander's assessment of Zatanna when she first showed up to him was spot on.

I forgot about Zatanna's backwards written spells. Its been so long since I read the comics. Mostly within character, although I am not sure how she is portrayed currently in the Comics, but up to the late 90's she was quite arrogant.

Batman was definitely in character, in fact he and Xander are very similar in many ways, except that Bruce Wayne is far better trained and equipped. The JLA's reaction to the fact that he knew their identities was great.
Review By [TimeTwist] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
super cool. please keep writing.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from JasonBarnett
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How I long for a fic where the writer thinks enough of Xander to write the others properly.

Slayers are for protecting people, that's the whole point. The supernatural always trumps the natural. Buffy can fling around a big guy like Larry like he's nothing. Xander is smaller than Larry, so she could do that to Xander easier. And most vamps are as strong as Buffy.

Kennedy never seemed underage to me. They did make a big deal about her being the oldest SIT, and since the others all seemed about 16 she had to be at least 17 getting ready to turn 18.

Willow doesn't resurrect people anymore, if she did she'd be fucking Tara, not Kennedy.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from greydog
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So far you are doing great. I am really liking your story and I hope to see more chapters soon. Keep up the good work.
Review By [greydog] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from banner
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Many new ideas. I'm looking forward to reading more. This could be so cool.
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from NoLifeKing
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Yeah! Great and nicely long chapter! :-)
Interesting to read a not so nice view of Willow and Buffy. Seems Willow isn't already good enough for thought-magic, if she needs gestures and speech yet.
Took me a while to see that Zatanna speaks backwards. ;-)
Can't await to see where this will go!
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from Dreamweaver
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Wow. Oh, wow. X-CELLENT! This first chapter is SO NEAT!

I REALLY hope that you intend to continue writing this story. Just from this one chapter, you've managed to get my attention. Continue? Please?
Review By [Dreamweaver] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enter JLA" from ishtara
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ARRG! You can't stop there! Pretty please write more soon.
Review By [ishtara] • Date [16 Nov 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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