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Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (6/10)" from brokenangel
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Interesting crossover idea. I think this is the first time I've seen these two crossed. Love the Xander/Faith having a baby. All I can say is about damn time. Keep up the good work.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [3 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (6/10)" from Bill
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GREAT! Very well done!
Review By [Bill] • Date [2 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (6/10)" from Elleria
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More soon!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (6/10)" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good characterization, drama and dialog in the living room. Somewhat confused by the action of the three groups. You have Harmony capturing members from both of the human teams? She's not captured? Oogly if they are vamped.
Comments from author:
Yeah, Riley and his guys plus the Watcher retrieval team sent after Faith... And Harmony right now is the only vamp.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Billy's Back and He's Kinda In Some Trouble" from Elleria
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More soon!!!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Dec 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Billy's Back and He's Kinda In Some Trouble" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting plot twist. Was WR's soul in purgatory the whole time the vampire was in him. So he didn't deserve heaven -- but now he has a second chance. And what kind of name is "Ragsdale" anyway? Does that mean his people came from a village that made clothing? Are you going to make him a secret Malfoy? Thanks for continuing the tale.
Comments from author:
William Ragsdale is the actual human name for the vampire that became Spike. It is canon, actual series. But you're right, it does sound like a place cloth/clothing was made. Or since rags are mentioned, maybe they made paper?

Thanks for reading.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Billy's Back and He's Kinda In Some Trouble" from CPTSkip
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OMG! I totally did not see that coming. Lol! I can't wait for more to see where you are taking our heroes from here. Obviously there will be more than five episodes now. Yay!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son 4" from Elleria
Review:
Love this story. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [26 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son 4" from VillageOrchid
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Thanks for continuing this story. I think crossover stories that include "fixes" in them are an interesting sub-genre that can be done poorly or well. This one is fun, even for its *intentional* out of character development that goes with your AU plot. I'm enjoying your take on the family building and trying to live a peaceful existance along-side the supernatural. As you may know by now when I give a story a rating I usually rate it towards its professionalism and my personal enjoyment. Even if you haven't figured that out, please consider this number above as "quite good" and "more than moderately sucessful."
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Nov 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son 4" from CPTSkip
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This just such a sweet story. I can't wait to see how it ends. Maybe Buffy and Tara can link up? Let's face it, Tara is just a lot cooler person than Riley. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (3/5)" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [18 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (3/5)" from carmsfic
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Great story. I was a fan of the movie and the show. I look forward to your future installments. Please keep up the great job!
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (3/5)" from VillageOrchid
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Xander is a little rushed to implement the changes, but lots of them are life and death, and he's had 3 years of life and death stuff coming up. So I guess I can see it. A little fast on the "must tell Willow she'll go all Wolfy in the long run." Maybe some thoughts to lead up to it, or discussion with Giles? Maybe show the pet store getting his eye, and then thinking about how he should let her know what his thoughts are as soon as possible, due to the risks (and wanting Willow to know that he accepts her choices)?

In the last chapter I would have liked to see him figuring out about the mining, and how he had 50 issues of his comic book. Also who will he get to draw it? Did he use mind-magic to create the artwork? An interesting tale.
Comments from author:
Much of this will be covered in the next part. But for the most part, all of this was developed on the ship, so all he has to handle is the whole marketing thing.

The Willow going wolfy thing was panic-Xander. The next two parts will be about the Scoobs finding/renewing their group direction rather than splintering as in canon.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xtarman’s Son (2/5)" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting and unexpected turns. All plausible in context. I'm curious that if Xander learned how to be semi-corporial if he were able to examine and isolate the reminants of his hyena and soldier posessions. Also could elaborate on the 5 Powers martial arts manual from the space-men? Do those powers relate to the Powers-that-Be?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xtarman's Son" from VillageOrchid
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Kinda sweet, and an interesting choice for 3 months in space or three weeks on earth. Also I like that you give Star Man Xander's trivia knowledge so he can explain things better.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Nov 05] • Not Rated
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