Review of chapter "Part I: I'm Not in Kansas Anymore" from
MarcusRowlandReview:
Nice start - be interested to see how you handle the interaction with Bilbo etc., since they presumably don't have languages in common. With (a) the lighter, (b) the staff, (c) the cigarettes and (d) all the Slayer stuff Faith runs a real risk of being mistaken for a wizard or witch!
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MarcusRowland] • Date [12 Dec 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part I: I'm Not in Kansas Anymore" from
warReview:
good start looking forward to your next chapter.
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war] • Date [12 Dec 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I: I'm Not in Kansas Anymore" from
kribbyReview:
Cool opening.
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kribby] • Date [12 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part I: I'm Not in Kansas Anymore" from
MrPlumbeanReview:
This is really good.
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MrPlumbean] • Date [11 Dec 05] • Not Rated