You know ... I dont know why I haven't updated this in so long ... I have the first 9 chapters written ... I shall have to go reread them all tomorrow and post a couple for you.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Hah! Obviously Jack doesn't read his memos, therefore neither he nor Teal'c know who this woman is. Actually, I'm hoping that Faith picks on, and puts Jack in his place before actually having fun with Teal'c.
It will be interesting to read how your muse takes the Faith/Daniel meeting. So far in this story, I'd think she wouldn't give a second thought to him, other than classifying him as among the more capable scientists as far as self-defense.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [15 Nov 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Nice. I usually like a bit more description for the fight or sparring scenes but yours fit the story so well that I enjoyed it. Are you gonna have her and T spar? I think that'd be awesome.
Please dont be one of those that say Jaffa are as good as Slayers. J. ARE apparently stronger than baseline humans, but a Vamp is (supposedly) 4X stronger and a master is even more. Not to mention the speed. Now a J is generally stronger than your avrg Vamp simply because the V is powered up BUT 4x an in shape H. and 2X a Body builder pretty much evens out. Its the speed that makes the difference along with the V. invulnerabilities. that give them the advantage.
Teal'c on the other hand is a FIRST PRIME that means his skill level is extremely high letting him push B/F and stand a good chance at beating the Mini's so I do want a good match but F should still win without pulling out ALL the stops. (Just a good batch of them.)
Comments from author:
lol, don't worry. You just listed a good deal of my own irritations with that particular problem. -D
Review By [SFBKludge] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
There's going to be at least one, then maybe several people going to Janet Fr. complaining that she's a secret Goa'uld, heh....ie demanding re-tests on her. Starting as an instructor I can see, but she's kind of wasted there (after all, most of what she has is mystical including the skill, not sure she can teach that..--but she'd be a lot more useful on a team, I'd think --
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Starting Again" from Skyefather
Review:
hey there I likec this so far and am looking forward to more updates soon
*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [Skyefather] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Interesting! I'm glad you decided to pick up on and add to this (though the bit about the Spike-Angel memorial at the end of the first chapter was a lovely conclusion to a poignant one-shot).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [9 Nov 09] • Not Rated