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Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from eliseth
Review:
This is a really great wonderful story. I love it :)
Thank you so much for this one.
Comments from author:
Thank you and you're welcome. I had always wondered what would happen should Buffy completely shut off her emotions, and this was my first attempt at it. I'm so glad that you like it.:)
Review By [eliseth] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Twiddle Our Thumbs?" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I like it, but Thor sounds a bit too much like Yoda. The Asgard tend to be formal, and Thor saying "Daniel" instead of "Dr. Jackson" just doesn't sound right.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

Sorry about that. Thought them spending more time together rather than his hit and run visits on the show would have had him being a little more informal.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from RippersGirl
Review:
Very interesting idea for a story! Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [RippersGirl] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
I like it. This is the first story I've read that completely gets rid of all things supernatural. :)
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [8 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from Bunney
Review:
This was a great story did you write a sequal or is that not something you plannned?

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times.

I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

I haven't considered a sequel, but I never say never.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [8 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from Ansku
Review:
Great one :)
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [18 Sep 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from Wolflady
Review:
Great story, but Xander was quite a bit out of character.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

I have to say I waffle on how I see Xander. Some of my earlier stories were rather hard on him, and this one kinda fell in the middle.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [16 Aug 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doesn't anyone just say what they mean anymore?" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
"Emerald eyes closed, the long dark braid whipped behind the still body, as the spacecraft shot through galaxies to stop several universes away."

--This statement is flawed. There are countless galaxies, but only one universe. Unless you were trying to say "several parallel universes away" this was flawed. Just thought you'd want to know.

""Kali, she's a good kid. Don't keep her asleep too long." Whistler left before she carried out her threat."

--I liked this line. Great chapter! Whistler is such a great plot device.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

Hope you enjoyed the way the story played out.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bad Habit" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I loved Teal'c's confusion at the end.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bad Habit" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
'Kali pushed down on the emotions the SG-1 team caused her to feel. She lulled Buffy back to sleep. "

--I like the implications of this sentence; that Kali is a completly different person/entity (although it is a little obvious). Buffy gave control to Kali, not wanting to deal with the "human/earthly coil" anymore. This sentence can either mean that Kali likes the power of being in control, and wants to keep Buffy asleep (although this doesn't seem very likely as it has been stated that all Kali does is fight and live, she has no emotion or joy-more machine like, really). Or, Kali is safeguarding Buffy from the humanity she is running from.


Anyway. I liked this chapter.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

Kali was safeguarding Buffy.

Hope you enjoyed the way the story played out.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bad Habit" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
Very interesting battle and judgement system.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

Hope you enjoyed the way the story played out.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's What Friends Do" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
""Don't bet the farm on that one, Peaches. You weren't there to see what they did to her the past few years, especially after she came back. They treated her worse than a dog." Spike growled at the memories. "Miss the Slayer, but as long as she's not with them, I can live with it."

--I love Spike and his loyalty! This paragraph just made me all happy!

"I wonder where B is and what she's doing? Bet she's out there somewhere dancing, picking up hotties." Faith sauntered out of the office leaving two growling vampires behind her."

---Silly Faith-throwing oil on a passionate (and snipity) fire, just to see what happens.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

I love how Faith stirs the pot, she's a story character to us for just that purpose.

Hope you enjoyed the way the story played out.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Twiddle Our Thumbs?" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
"Daniel rubbed his neck. "I'm not so sure this time that they would be wrong.""
---Yeah; She would be the goddess of Death, but still. Great line.

Loved this chapter-interesting to see from SG's POV
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [9 Apr 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from Jalimar
Review:
cooky but i liked it. great job
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

Hope you enjoyed the way the story played out.
Review By [Jalimar] • Date [21 Feb 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joining the Rat Race" from Jerri
Review:
I thought this was a very clever premise and enjoyed the story and the excellent writing a great deal. Well done.
Comments from author:
thank you, sorry for not responding sooner, RL seems to get away from me at times. I really do appreciate you reading and reviewing my stories.

Hope you enjoyed the way the story played out.
Review By [Jerri] • Date [4 Nov 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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