What bad thing did Xander say? He just said that he viewed Buffy as family as well and assumed she did, too? They lost Buffy and Dawn in the same fight, Buffy apparently unnecessarily and he's not supposed to be upset.

And Thor's whole keep the strength, throw away the weakness line? Well, first of all it sounded contrdictory. Maybe the people in the SGC are supposed to be better friends? Don't forget Jack was able to fool everyone into thinking he had gone bad, so he's good at acting and hiding his emotions. Sam can get to consumed in her work. There's other issues with the rest of them. Secondly it sounds more like the way an Ancient woudl phrase things to me.

It's more that he was upset that she chose not to share her pain with him, 'her family', ignoring the fact that she lost the last remaining 'real' family member that she had. Not to mention that only the day before they kicked her out of her own home. Yes, Dawn was part of that, but she is/was a scared child. The Scoobies fought along side Buffy all these years and in the last greatest fight suddenly don't trust her to lead them.

As far as SG-1 goes, I did explain that although I am not an expert, I relied on several betas who are avid fans. The characterization of Thor is not canon and I do know that, but there is a much broader and darker reason for that pivotal to the story.

I'm sorry if you don't like the way that the story started or is going. If you choose not to continue to read, I will fully understand. If you do then I will look forward to your future reivews.

brilliant start to the story. what an original idea. i can't wait for SG 1 to meet her and find out how she kicks Goa'uld butt. UPDATE VERY SOON PLZ! SlayerBunny

Thank you. I promise that when they meet there will be lots of surprises.

I'm not really liking the cold Buffy or Thor's explanation of grapping Buffy to fight for his cause. Although I liked the black eyes.

Sorry that you don't like the way the story is going. Did you mean you mean grabbing? A person tends to shut down when they see their last remaining family member die in front of their eyes though. Thanks taking the time to review though and have a great day and a happy New Yeat

hey I read this over at your site its great!!!

Thanks jammies. Sometimes I post stories over here since this is where I posted my first story.