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Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from spk
Review:
Very interesting so far. I love BtVS/SG-1 crossovers. As for the pairing...I know that Buffy & Daniel fit more age-wise, but I love the smartass chemistry of Buffy & Jack. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Comments from author:
I don't have a problem pairing Buffy with older guys. In fact I think their better for her - she's a lot older than her years. Don't worry no matter who I choose there'll be plenty of Buffy/Jack snarkiness.
Review By [spk] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from Venus
Review:
I love the story. How about Buffy/Teal'c. I've only seen one of those.
Comments from author:
And it was a good one. He's just so hard to write.
Review By [Venus] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from rutterla
Review:
I really like this story so far. I think you should pair Buffy with Jack. It looks like they already have the type of relationship where either they will kill each other or love each other fiercely. I can't wait till the next chapter.
Comments from author:
That's actually one of the reasons I love Jack/Buffy. I'm also a huge fan of Spike/Buffy for the same reason.
Review By [rutterla] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from fallenangel
Review:
I enjoyed this immensly and look forward to reading the rest of this story. Keep up the good work. Love the word play between Jack and Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I love snarky Jack and he and snarky Buffy are so funny together.
Review By [fallenangel] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from Alianna
Review:
This is a pretty cool beginning, I've never read this kind of take on a Buffy/SG-1 x-over.
I hope to read more of this interesting plot.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the story. I was going for something different than what's out there. I'm glad you think I've got it so far.
Review By [Alianna] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from immortalsilence
Review:
loving it loving it loving it. Once I've written a couple of chapters I'll email them to you. Thanks
Comments from author:
Sounds good - look forward to seeing your story.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from sean
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This story is off to a good start, and I have a strong lean for a Buffy/Daniel pairing, they make a good couple. I like reading your stories, they are written really well, keep up the tempo, it's amazing
Comments from author:
I really like Buffy/Daniel stories as well. He's a nice balance to her impulsive nature in a normal cross. But here Buffy has grown up a lot so Jack might be a better match for the newer, calmer Buffy. I still can't decide. Aghh!
Review By [sean] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "First Contact Doesn't Go So Well" from jammiesMM
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Not too bad of course Jack always has to make some smart remark. Sometimes I think he does it on purpose to see how far he can push people to get a reaction. Then he can maybe get a better "read" on the person by their reaction. I mean Buffy pretty much revealed she is stronger and faster by doing what she did so now SG1 know that. Just a thought because I see him do that in the series and like I said I think he does it to get a reaction out of people *sometimes*... other times I think he does it to just annoy people LOL. Anyway about the pairing I don't have a preference either way so I am not going to vote *sorry* I am sure whoever you pick will be good.
Comments from author:
I think Jack is a trouble maker at heart. Makes you wonder how he reached the rank of Colonel then General.

Remember on this world Buffy is not secret identity girl. She doesn't have to hide who she is and her people know exactly what she can do.
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from jammiesMM
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Cool start!!! This looks to be as good as your first fic. So who to pair her with well I dunno. I would say the new leader of SG1 Lt Col Mitchell but it doesn't look like he is in this story. I think he would be good with Buffy he is a bit younger then Jack but still kind of has that "snarky" attitude. Besides I loved him in Farscape LOL But since he doesn't appear to be an option I really couldn't tell you either way from me either one would be good or not pair her with anyone from earth she has made her home on this other planet and she protects the people would she really want to leave them? Just some thoughts.... looking forward to more of this story.
Comments from author:
I hadn't thought of that. To be honest I haven't watched Stargate much since Jack was promoted. Everyone is in such a turmoil over possible pairings. I may make this romance free or maybe romance light.
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from Tynan
Review:
Looks like this one is going to be as good as the Immortal Slayer..I'm kinda hoping she doesn't go back to her friends and either stays where she is or at sgc..Keep up the good work
Comments from author:
Buffy's grown up a lot where she's at and the people of the planet are important to her. She won't completely abandon them.
Review By [Tynan] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from rpgwarrior
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This seems like an absolutely wonderful story so far. I am just hoping that Buffy doesn't get paired up with Jack or Daniel. It seems like pretty much any buffy/stargate fic where Buffy gets paired off she ends up with one of those two. It isn't like there aren't other men (or women :]) in the mountain that she could hook up with. And if she did end up joining the SGC, would she even be allowed to get into a relationship with one of them? It would also be surprising if she didn't end up seeing someone after five years stuck on that world, it isn't like she would really be able to expect to go home. I am kinda hoping that some of the people from the world she was on become important parts of the story as well. Five years spent on a world would almost certainly leave a pretty large impression on someone not any older than 27 ( I think).
Comments from author:
Your right - I have her at age 26 in this story. She does have strong ties to the people of her planet and those will be shown in the story. Buffy will not just pickup and leave.

I'll think about what you said about the pairings.
Review By [rpgwarrior] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from aforestgrew
Review:
Yay! From what I read in this chapter I'm going to enjoy this story very much. I love Buffy-centric Stargate crossovers and you've managed to find a fairly unique way of incorporating Buffy into the SG:1 universe. There are too many fics that have Buffy fall from the portal into the Mountain and go from there. I like how you narrated this first chapter but I imagine that the rest of the story will be second person instead. You made one mistake in how you spelled Chappa'ai but otherwise I didn't notice any spelling or grammar problems. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Amy
Comments from author:
Thanks. I looked up the spelling but I couldn't find an "official" source just the website I listed. I'll fix it.

As for the narration style - you're right that was only for the first chapter. Not to say I won't use it a little here and there for exposition purposes but it will be different in future chapters.
Review By [aforestgrew] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from immortalsilence
Review:
ok how did you know that i love a good Buffy/Stargate crossover ,i think im repeating myself more please
Comments from author:
Me to! I love, love, love Buffy/Stargate. I went to be last night with this chappy in my head and woke up with it and it was still there after I wrote chp. 19 of Immortal Slayer so I had to get it out. Feel much better now.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from SlayerBunni
Review:
gr8 start to this story! plz try and make the next chapter longer? UPDATE SOON! SlayerBunny!
Comments from author:
The next chapter will probably be longer this one was just to set the stage so to speak.
Review By [SlayerBunni] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from Claddagh
Review:
Oooohhhh, good start! Can't wait to see what you have in mind. What pairings did you have in mind? Buffy and Teal'c have a lot in common.......
Comments from author:
I know but I just can't write Teal'c. He's to stoic. I've only read one really good Buffy/Teal'c. My preference is Jack or Daniel. I love Buffy with either one of them.
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [1 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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