Review of chapter "Embarrassing immortality and epilogues" from purrfus
Review:
A lot of fun to read. You did a really good job of choosing interesting characters and giving them all play.
I would like to see more of Angel and Cordy's adventures, and what happens to Buffy and Methos. Maybe someday.
Comments from author:
I was trying to make sure I could give everyone some play time without pulling my hair out. I try to pick people that I enjoy. As for Angel and Cordy's adventures that's a bit harder. I maintain my story on two different sights. The other site has issues with people using the world I sent them too. So any story I do about them would have to be a seperate story. The best I'll promise is that it's on the back burner. As for a story on what happens with Buffy and Methos, that has a lot better chance of happening. Even if it's just a short.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Another round of shopping" from arkeus
Review:
hey!!! you forgot about hagrid!!! and go hermione, i want her to gain new mad skillz!!!
Comments from author:
I'm sure that Hermione will have some pretty good skills. However developing skill takes time.
Review of chapter "Buffy's first visit" from arkeus
Review:
hum...there are some small details you didn't explain, and it's kind of sad willow didn't buy lots of books and drain them at flurish&blott, just in case, to know about hermione's magic theory, and maybe duplicate it. oh well...
well well well, i like the immortal bit, though i would have liked if willow's power would grow enough in the next few hundred years for her to do it without the help of the gloves :ppp great work. it's really interesting thus far.
sniff, no descriptions :/ Great work, i think it really has gotten smoother. Oh, about iwllow, i think she is more than just "one of the most powerful witch around", but hey, that's your fic. But i like god!willow usually :p
Comments from author:
What she is and what she considers herself are different things. She also absorbed a lot of knowledge with all of the books she drained.
Review of chapter "Trip to Diagon Alley" from arkeus
Review:
still a bit awkward, but it dos get better :-)
hum, i am all for all-powerful willow, so i always get sad when she gets tired after one or two spells, but i guess she will get better, after all at that time she isn't that used to making big spell without calling on an external power. Oh, and i on't like the idea of dark magic>white magic.
Comments from author:
My take on willow is that she is one of the most powerful Witches around. She isn't going to be the most knowledgable but she is up there in power level. If she gets tired from a spell it's because I view it as a major spell.
Review of chapter "Arrival at the Burrow" from arkeus
Review:
hum...i think i have already read this, but hey.... I had stopped because there was lots of awkward moment, but as i like your other story i think i'll plough on. :-)
Comments from author:
Yeah well there are a number of those. I hope the reviewing and editing I did a while back helped. But most likely just push through and you'll be okay. No promises though :)
I'm glad you like it enough to try to read some of the back ground.
What Jenny doesn't get to be an immortal? Harry gets to watch her grow old and die? Other than that which stinks. It was a GREAT story...
Comments from author:
I have reasons why she didn't want to become immortal when the rest of the group did. She is a witch so she has a good number of years before she has to worry about growing old and dieing. I suggest checking out the sequel to this one. I'm glad you like it.
Review By [trme] • Date [28 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]