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Review of chapter "Another round of shopping" from Harry
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Looks like some things are starting to come together. Love is blooming among many of the people in the house. And it looks like the plans for Fred are in place. Time for the Hogwarts gang to head back and get everything ready for training and the battle against the forces summoned by W&H.
Comments from author:
Something like that :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bad Andrew, bad doggy" from Harry
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BAD ANDREW! ANDREW, SIT! *I'm thinking Inyuasha for that!* Now, as for what Cordy said, ANYTHING that screws with the PTB, I am all in favor of! Time to teach THEM a few lessons, especially if it messes up with their plans. Time for some MAJOR research time girls!
Comments from author:
Andrew often does things he shouldn't. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Summoning rituals for storks" from Harry
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Love the D&D world. The shapeshifters really give the Slayers and the magic users some insights and taste of magics that might help out in the future. Time to take care of those who are expecting, as well as those who might, and could in the future.
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you enjoyed the D&D world.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Skyclad dancing girls" from Harry
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A D&D World? YES! My highest character in 4th ed is a 11th level Githzerai seeker. Long range first striker for the group. And I am looking forward to how the new version of our Werewolf works out for the group.
Comments from author:
You won't see 4th in this but hey... it's a D&D world. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Potions are useful?" from Harry
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Well, the first mating session is in progress! And I see Willow and Hermione having a VERY nice time as well. Now, time to meet up with the new slayer from the tech/magic world.
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Buffy's first visit" from Harry
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The cry that Dawn gave when she went into the portal, reminded me SO MUCH of the show Sliders! Dimensional Portals, different worlds, it reminds me very much of that show. And I do agree that they WILL have to pry Giles out of the library! We ALL know how much Rupert loves books and libraries.
Comments from author:
Yep and yep.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet the Scoobies" from Harry
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Well, it sounds like Harry and some of the other guys are going to be getting their bones jumped over the next few days! I smell some new members of the Potter family coming around over the next few years.
Comments from author:
Quite possible.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Moving a house" from Harry
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I like the idea of the house being in the Nexus. Makes it easier to go to and from dimensions to get to other slayers. And I THINK that while Harry might be thinking wrong, I do believe that Hermione is getting her first taste of Lesbian loving!
Comments from author:
Read and find out...
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Collecting the Gardener" from Harry
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The idea of Dawn Patrol planning the strike at the Death Eaters Vaults at Gringotts has some merit to it. I just hope she can come up with a good plan of attack.
Comments from author:
Most likely. :)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trip to Diagon Alley" from Harry
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Well, we know who might be going on the trip to our world. For now though, its time to rest and think about what Dawn has told them about Willow's past, and what they might face.
Comments from author:
Read and find out...
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lemon drop" from Harry
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Well, the recruitment seems to be going well. Now, to see what Diagon Alley brings for the group.
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrival at the Burrow" from Harry
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Well, Willow and Dawn have managed to explain things to those present. Now, will the Harry Potter group accept what they are being told, or will they stick to what they have been taught since they have been born?
Comments from author:
Read and find out...
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miscast portals" from Harry
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Red and Dawn arriving at Hermione's residence in their BIRTHDAY SUITS? A) How long is Andrew going to be target dummy for Faith and Buffy? B) Who gets Willow and who gets Dawn? This should be very interesting to see who gets paired with whom.
Comments from author:
A while and you'll have to read to find out.
Review By [Harry] • Date [16 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lemon drop" from DieselDriver
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"Kleptodawn". Sounds like some weird kind of dinosaur. BTW, I meant to mention it earlier but you have some interesting word choices or perhaps typos. In a previous chapter you used "creator" instead of "crater" to describe what was left of Sunnyhell.
Comments from author:
I'll assume typos. And yeah Kleptodawn does sound like a strange creature.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [15 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Another round of shopping" from HMaxMarius
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Hi! I've recently stumbled across this and have been greatly enjoying it...

I did, however, have a bit of a nit to pick. Should you ever come back to this story and look to re-write/clean-up what you have already written I would point out that (I think it was) chapter 11 where you had a string of dialog about 20 or 30 exchanges long where every single exchange began with 'Well'. By the end of it my eyes were swimming and I was beginning to consider whether or not the cetacean population might have been increased had you chosen to misspell the word. =D

Anyway, just thought I'd give a bit of feedback before moving on to the next chapter. As said, I'm enjoying the concept, even if there are some issues in the mechanics. (Since this story was last updated six years ago, I'm sure you're a much better writer now.)
Comments from author:
Ouch... I don't remember that many wells in one place but as you said it's been a while. While I've still got a ways to go, I'd like to think that I've gotten better in the last six years.

Thanks for the feedback and it's always nice to have feedback even after the fact.
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Not Rated
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