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Review of chapter "Inquisitive Minds" from (Past Donor)Aomizuoko
Review:
UPDATE! Really good by the way. ^_^
Review By [(Past Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Songs and stories" from Vld
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Good choice. One, she has friends who saved the world on numerous occasions. Two, she won't let an old coot dictate her life. Very good choice indeed.
Review By [Vld] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One day" from aussiemel
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Love it. Please keep up the good work and update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for all the reviews. I'm trying to update soon, but I'm haveing difficulty with the next chp. Hopefully it'll come together soon. Bye!
Review By [aussiemel] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One day" from Naitch
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Hmmm...This story has promise.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making up... Beds and other Dilemmas" from Naitch
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This is rather intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take it from here.
Review By [Naitch] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One day" from TarnishedGold
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It's an interesting premise, and one I'd like to see finished, but it jumps around a bit to much. By the time I figure out where I am and what's going on we're somewhere completely different. Maybe break it down by chapter Dawn... hermione... Draco etc. and clarify the timeline a bit. Excellent idea, though. Looking forward to seeing more.
Gold
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [16 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One day" from VillageOrchid
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A slow but intruiging start. Looking forward to more.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One day" from MarcusRowland
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Nice to see someone tackling this challenge. Looking forward to more.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [14 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Choices" from Vld
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You have to give it to the guy, he has some points. Loyalty, and all. But sometimes loyalty must be forgotten in light of the greater good. He is stuck with another choice. Try to be what is expected of him, and try to be someone who makes the difference. I liked that part. Okay, now, who the hell is in the hospital wing? i mean, not Harry obviously (again, what happened to him?) but there must be someone! Either Ginny, Ron or Luna (Hermione seems to be fine... at least physically, and Neville was in Gryffindor) and some other rather important character... such as either another Weasley, or Lupin.
Comments from author:
Sorry just realised that I'd never explained what Draco saw. I'll post that chp next in chp 4 with an AN explaining. Thanks for writing, just keep with me!! :)
Review By [Vld] • Date [25 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lives You Leave Behind" from (Past Donor)Kiara
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Great start, I really like the idea. One thing, where does this come in the HP verse? A timeline at the beginning of the chapter would help a lot. Update soon!
Kiara x
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiara] • Date [20 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lives You Leave Behind" from tals
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Lovely story. I like that you take your time, and allow the gryffindors to show grief, instead of trying to get the factual stuff (how he died) out of the way within the first two sentences. It makes for a much better story, and though I'll admit to being curious about what happened, not telling us it, but instead focusing on the reactions make the characters seems more real. You have a nice tone of voice in this story, and what seems like the beginning of a fairly original plot.

Enjoy writing. Tals
Review By [tals] • Date [19 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lives You Leave Behind" from Vld
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Interesting. Very interesting. I wonder how you will make her fit the prophecy. One question, though. What EXACTLY happened to Harry?
Review By [Vld] • Date [19 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Lives You Leave Behind" from Erica
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INteresting plot. I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see were you go with this.
Review By [Erica] • Date [19 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Lives You Leave Behind" from LurkerOOl
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Lookin' forward to seeing where you go with this. It will be interesting to see Dawn take over Harry's mantle, and if the occasional scooby helps, that'll be even more fun. Good job so far.
Review By [LurkerOOl] • Date [19 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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