*Evil Laughter* Oh I LIKE Buffy's retaliation there! They thought they had all the cards, and Buffy tears into them from a corner they weren't even looking in!! Ok, you've got my attention, though you've brought up some questions I have to ask.
1. Since Buffy not a Slayer anymore, is she got something else that will make her similarly valuable in special situations? I mean something like her being a descendant of the Ancients, in case I was too vague.
2. How the HELL did she slip through into another dimension like that?
Until then, I'll be watching for updates avidly :-D.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [20 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ooooh... that was mean... but funny. At first I was having some problems with the chapter, mainly because I wanted to know what the current action had to do with the larger story. By the end I saw much more clearly. This story seems to be a slow burn type fic, which, based on the way you are going with it will be really interesting... It will be fun to see where it goes as the story developes.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [20 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Having read the prologue I was entirely willing to hate this. But I got completely caught up with the way in which Buffy handled the doctors and, ultimately, the director. Brilliant writing and I look forward to more.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [20 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Wow! That's original! I so did not see that coming. I loved it. Reading it is an abosulte pleasure, you really manage to bring Buffy and her emotions and thoughts alive, as well as the sheer scale of what's going on. And then in the last few paragraphs; shock. Lovely. Really good writing, and, for a prologue; impressive plotting. I'm gonna follows this story. Intrigued by where it's going to end up.
Jewel
