Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Specks
That was really intense. The way you could see Quentin's brain work and the weariness that you inject so perfectly into the tone of the piece. As the story moved along, there was an increase in the heaviness of the tone, like a burden. You show excellent control of the writing elements and amazing intuition when it comes to human emotion. The sorrow and inevitability of a Slayer's end is so well painted here. Just awesome.
Review By [Specks
] • Date [11 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Geyer
Well-written, incredible twists. This is an impressive story. I liked the way you developed reasonable explanations for things that didn't make much sense on the show, and yes, it even made me sympathize a bit with Quentin Travers.
Review By [Geyer
] • Date [5 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from IntoOblivion
In an odd way this was beautiful, despite the subject matter... This story is a truly wonderful read, looking into the science and mythology of the slayer in an original way that leaves you guessing right until the end. I love your descriptions of Quentin's slayer, the strongest girl he knew despite lasting under a week. His emotions for her and reasons for the council's actions make you like him without branching from what we knew of him in the show. An inspiring read.
Review By [IntoOblivion
] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wargear
Woah. What a headtrip.
Keep up the good work.
Review By [wargear
] • Date [11 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sulien
Damn. No words to say how good this truly was! The premise that the Slayer's body will give out due to the stresses placed upon it by her mystical enhancements was very well thought out and "real". Having sustained injuries to my knees and spine myself that have resulted in osteo arthritis and severe muscle spasms, this fic hit home in a way that no other ever has.
This was a wicked, sickening twist worthy of Joss himself (my heart plummeted to my feet there at the end). Keep writing, I want to read more of your work!
Review By [Sulien
] • Date [27 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreamfall
Wow-- amazing story. A totally logical way of looking at it from an unfamiliar angle. I particularly liked the alternat look at the Cruciamentum, but also the various other ways in which the Council was working for the Slayer when it seemed the opposite. And the ways in which it used the girls that they never expected. And the end was simply painful. Lovely job.
Review By [dreamfall
] • Date [22 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vld
Ouch!!!! That DID hurt! Even more because of the science behind it!!! You could give all comics, TV shows or whatever writers a run for their money with these kinda theories!!! Ever thought of trying to create your own kinda supersoldier? I mean a book, obviously.
Review By [Vld
] • Date [11 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sadfru
Well fuck, you just stuck logic into a magical world, put a believable limit on the slayer essence in a fragile human shell, kept each character in character and totally bummed my high from your other fic.
Can't even hate you for it since you did it so bloody well.
Congrats on the great writing but really hope you stay away from this style in the future.
On a side note I would have liked a watchers report detailing the utter anhilation of the Vamp/Demon horde in Europe, in a clinical and british manner mentioning in passing her demise, let the girl go out in a bang
Review By [Sadfru
] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fooo
A wonderfully horrifying vision of an alternate Council and Buffy.
Review By [Fooo
] • Date [17 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sandi
Oh my. That explains so much. It's creepy, scary and 'real'. Please keep writing.
Review By [Sandi
] • Date [28 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Eagle
man this was creepy! i liked this alot! i felt so bad for Buffy by the end, and i was surprised that Travers apparently regretted Faith's death, loved this story though.
Review By [Eagle
] • Date [27 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lotusja
Wow! this make me think...
Review By [Lotusja
] • Date [25 Jan 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jewel
Dear god but you're good at this! First you force me to like Travers and then add in a truly horrible ending - and I still enjoyed it. Very well done.
Review By [Jewel
] • Date [24 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
I like it and I hate it at the same time. One because you have made a very logical and believable story and I hate it is because what would happen to Buffy.
Review By [WhiteWolf
] • Date [23 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Valkyrie
That's just neat.
Review By [Valkyrie
] • Date [23 Jan 06] • Not Rated