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Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from banditdoz
Review:
Fantastic update you have me intrigued I love the way it all flows together :D
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad it's still all flowing together despite the gap in updating. =D
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from NimbustheMariner
Review:
Compellingly plotted, well written with minimal spelling mistakes and good characterisation. I like it.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! That pretty much ticks off all the important parts of a story, lol. =D
Review By [NimbustheMariner] • Date [22 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from spartan
Review:
I am impressed. Well worth the wait. Though I am somewhat dubious about Dawn being a Dragon, the story is fantastic overall. I like how you've gone with Draco's redemption, the developing relationship between the Council and the Wizards and all the good characterization. The plot is flowing and I get the feeling we are soon to reach the end game. Shame about Snape and Tonks but this story has become one of my favorites.

Update soon, I will be looking forward to it.

Jon
Comments from author:
Well, she's not an actual dragon - no sudden animal trasformations in this story - although there is a reason for the name. I'm glad the wizard/watcher's council relationship is developing well; I'm trying very hard to keep them ballanced and working together. And we are indeed slinking our way towards the end game... sort of. Snape is my favourite character and I absolutely hate that I had to kill him off! But plotwise and characterwise I just had to. :(

Thank you for the review! I'm very happy to hear you're enjoying the story and I'll try to have the next chapter up within the next couple of weeks!
Review By [spartan] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wonderful and exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'll try to have the next chapter up in a couple of weeks. =D
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [21 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from kalibex
Review:
*Nice* end to this chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked the ending. :)
Review By [kalibex] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from banditdoz
Review:
Wow great story I only just started reading. Its really good and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for writing :)
Review By [banditdoz] • Date [13 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from kallasbr
Review:
Very nice... love your fic the way that you deal whit the chars and the amazing plot, hope that don't take long for a update.
just some questions.

Angel gonna show in some point in the fic??

Illirya have some major role in the history ( i love her character and be nice if she appear more often)

really draco and dawn are not a couple? TT for almost 1/2 of the fic i have the impression that they are build up for that petty. but i still have hope that you change you mind and put then together.


English is not my first language so very sorry for my awful spelling. keep the good work
Comments from author:
Oh, whoops, sorry. Just noticed I totally seemed to have missed replying to your reivew here.

To answer your questions:

Angel... well, actually, you'll see a bit of him in the next chapter (as in the one after the one I posted today). Illyria does have a big role to play and she'll be around in the future. I, too, love her as a character, but there are so many other characters in this that it's hard to give everyone big roles.

And I had actually debated about making Dawn and Draco a couple, but then decided that the way I was writing them, they just didn't have the right kind of chemistry. Besides, Draco's emotionally in a very vulnerable place right now, even if I'm not really focusing on it. To me it feels like him suddenly developing anything meanful for Dawn would come across as unrealistic and shallow of him. But I do think they make a great team working together. =D

Thanks for reviewing and, again, sorry for taking so damn long to reply back.
Review By [kallasbr] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from SuukiAldrea
Review:
It took me two days, but I finally caught up with the story! You know, I think I had come across this story before, but passed it by because of the ocs. I had just finished reading a bunch of badly done stories with Mary-Sue's and--horror of horrors--had just realized I had created a Mary-Sue of my own. And written 17 chapters of it. Tolkien would be spinning in his grave and the creators of Dragonball Z, Inuyasha, and Yu Yu Hakusho would commit ritual suicide if they found out what I had done with their characters. Love your story so far. It's kept me in suspense and begging for more. So... More please! Thanks! P.S. Sorry this sounds rambling... I tend to do that often, hence my (i) usually (/i) short reviews. Ja ne!
Comments from author:
Lol, I am the LAST person, who would ever complain about rambly reviews - I am totally guilty of it myself.

Yeah, I realized even as I was writing it that I was taking a huge risk with the amount of OCs in that first chapter, but I just honestly couldn't think of a better way to start the story off or to introduce those particular characters into the story. I'm sure that, like you, a lot of people were probably put off by it. So, I'm very happy you gave this another try now. Not to mention super impressed that it only took you two days to get caught up.

I'm really glad you like the story! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Review By [SuukiAldrea] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from Knightmare
Review:
Hello I had a few questions about your wonderful story. I have dyslexia so reading doesn't always come easy for me though writing is easier. I have tried to follow as best as I can but a few things were confusing or maybe I miss understood.

What year does this take place for Harry? 5th year, 6th year?

Where is Harry at this current time? It seems he is not much in this story from what I have read. That's cool but I was wondering.

Is Harry aware of everything going around him concerning the war effort with the Watcher's Council or are the adults keeping him in the dark as usual.

How long has been the time frame from the first chapter until this last one?

Are Dawn and Conner dating or is she dating Draco?

I hope these questions are not to much to answer. I do look forward to hearing from you. Thanks and take care.
Comments from author:
Hey, I don't mind answering questions at all. The story is difficult enough to follow as is, I think (especially with the one-chapter-at-a-time updating model). To be honest, I'm constatly going back and re-reading bits of previous chapters to make sure I've got things straight in my own mind. Well, might as well answer your questions in order then:

The story starts in mid-July, just after Harry's 6th year. The chapter you've just finished reading took place on August 24th.

Right now, Harry is still at Hogwarts. He hasn't been in the story much, because he, Ron and Hermione have spent most of their time researching about horcruxes and how to find and destroy them, which, quite frankly, isn't all that interesting. I mean, they've had their shining moments, but only when they did something of interest.

Honestly, I haven't quite decided how much the adults are telling Harry about the joint effort with the Watcher's Council. Although, at this exact point in time, Harry would be in the Hogwarts infirmary after that spell Willow was casting basically attacked him. Also, after they broke their promise to stay put at Hogwarts during the summer, the kids are just a little bit grounded.

It's been just over a month between chapter one and the last one (maybe a month and a half: the first couple of chapters weren't quite as precisely dated).

Dawn's not dating anyone at the moment. Although she may be developing a slight crush on Charlie Weasley...

Hope that cleared things up! =D I'm really glad you're enjoying the story!
Review By [Knightmare] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Setting the Stage" from peterr
Review:
Hi, I have only just discovered this story & am loving it so far, & I am really looking forward to reading where it is heading. One minor point, the prime minister in HBP is clearly meant to be John Major, he had been PM for a while, & is reaching the end of his tether. The time also matches up as the start of HBP is in the summer of 1996 & Major was still PM, the next election was 1997 when the Labour Party won & Blair became PM.
Cheers & good luck with the rest of the story.
Comments from author:
Oh really? I didn't realize J.K. modelled her PM after the real one. Thanks for that bit of trivia! Now, even if I had known that when I started writing his bits, I likely would've just done what I did here and basically built my own character out of him, since I feel uncomfortable with the idea of writing real people into a fan fiction. You will notice later on that I use a completely made up person for the US president too.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Review By [peterr] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from freydis
Review:
Good chapter! glad they outed fake-Tonks. Wonder what will happen to whoever-it-is? Hope it's suitably nasty.

Yes, there is a pub in Avebury--the Red Lion.
Comments from author:
The Red Lion? Cool, thanks for confirming that for me! Glad you liked the chapter!
Review By [freydis] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from MMWillow
Review:
And if they thought Moody was hard on spies and traitors they have no idea how Buffy, Spike, Ripper and Willow respond to them! Can't wait for the Queen and her court to remove the scum
Comments from author:
Er.... yes they are definitely the LAST people any traitor would want to deal with (especially Spike, since he has absolutely no problems with getting his hands dirty). Although, in this case, Moody and Remus might actually be scarier since they actually knew the real Tonks and cared for her, so it's more personal.
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Funnily enough jeremy clarkson lives near there. Keep up the goo work.
Comments from author:
Lol, really? Well, as long as he doesn't live directly in Avebury, he should be safe. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from ChaosLady
Review:
Excellent update! And I'm very glad to be hearing from you so soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Although, I must confess, I've actually been sitting on this chapter for the past two weeks... I mean, this way you guys get an update still fairly quickly and it's two weeks less waiting time with no new chapter!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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