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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlameyFomorrii
Review:
I really liked this first chapter. It was neat how you switched from the different pov's fluidly. I also like how Buffy landed someplace NOT the SGC, because while I like that story line, I've also read that one a bit to much.


Hmm *time warp* I'm not going to be to worried about Buffy being dead the first chapter-it's a Buffy centric story and that's not possible if she's not there the other 23 chapters. Hey-will they use the sarcophagus on her?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the intro - and especially that you found the switching POVs so fluid. What can I say? I aim to please! Thanks again!
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [6 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from fivebyfive
Review:
Beautiful.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [fivebyfive] • Date [22 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from stasa
Review:
Beautiful story, I truly loved it. It has a really strong plot line and it's totally believable. You did a really good job whit the characters, you stayed true to them. Excellent job :D
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I'm so delighted that you enjoyed the story!
Review By [stasa] • Date [4 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from (Past Donor)morgyair
Review:
Loved the post card create for this story and well now I have another story I've really enjoyed!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [20 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from SnakeofMedusa
Review:
Woo-freakin'-hoo! One of the best SG fics I've read so far! I really liked your portrayl (sp?) of Xander, it made for much laughter and clapping hands in joy. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it - and the Xander scenes were so fun to write! ;p
Review By [SnakeofMedusa] • Date [17 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)sopchoppy
Review:
Great Story.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)sopchoppy] • Date [12 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from AshaDreamweaver
Review:
Really great fic. I never really thought of Jack/Buffy as a pairing but you made it so damn convincing!!! :)
Comments from author:
What can I say? Their mutual snark intrigues me! ;p Thank you for the review!
Review By [AshaDreamweaver] • Date [7 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from (Past Donor)Aomizuoko
Review:
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I'm speechless. Absolutely speechless. That was....it was....I mean....well damn. Girl you know how to write. You so I mean, I can't even....so heartbreaking....and just.....wow. Best writer *EVER* you are. I don't even watch Stargate and you made it so that I couldn't leave the computer for at least four hours. I'm sitting at my comp completely stunned.

I love how you did a little side note about Dawn in the last chapter. I love...everything about this. Now I really, really, wanna go buy season one of SGC and start watching the sires.
Comments from author:
*grins* If I've turned even one person into a SG1 fan, then I've somehow done my job right! It's a delightful show - very addicting - but be sure to give it some time to find its stride. Like most shows, the chemistry didn't really settle until the second season, but after that? Pure gold. Richard Dean Anderson as Colonel Jack O'Neil is nothing but gold, not to mention the rest of the superb cast. Very fun!

And I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story so much. Thank you for taking the time to review! :D
Review By [(Past Donor)Aomizuoko] • Date [5 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from wraithrune
Review:
I love this =D Thank you for completing this wonderful story
Comments from author:
Thank YOU for the review! :p
Review By [wraithrune] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from Alinora
Review:
Woohoo!!! :)

Congratulations on finishing! I've really enjoyed this story and the epilogue was a wonderful finish. While not everything is completely resolved, as Buffy lives in CA and Jack in CO, they're together and happy and doing well. The final twist with them saving Shau're and Skaara was great too, seeing something good come from her final possession.

A very enjoyable story!

-Ali
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! ;p I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story, and all of the twists, right down to the end! And yes, Buffy is still in CA and Jack is in CO, but they're needed in those places - and yet that doesn't mean that they'll never be seeing each other. I see many extended weekends, scheduled leaves, as well as vacations spent jumping back and forth between their respective homes!

THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!
Review By [Alinora] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Excellent ending... I liked the addition of the rescue mission. This entire story was very well written.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy that everything played out as it did - and I'm delighted that you enjoyed the ride! Thank you for reading!
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [9 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from feekh
Review:
I loved that end. Just had me sitting here with a huge smile on my face. Huge huge smile.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad that you enjoyed the ending! Thank you so much for the review!
Review By [feekh] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from poppie
Review:
I've loved this story from the beginning. The characters have really grown and they feel very real. I look forward to reading your next story!
Comments from author:
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :D
Review By [poppie] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from Lisa
Review:
Beautiful!

Wonderful!

Honestly, you captured so much in this final chapter. I never really looked at Dawn the way you wrote her 'issues' and gods that makes such perfect sense. Of course, now I feel like a tool for never picking up on Dawn's abandonment issues with everything that went on. That was brilliant!

Buffy & Jack vocalizing their 'I love you's' was just so perfect and wonderful and I loved all the detail you gave about what it mean. I have thoroughly enjoyed this piece! So thank you for writing it and finishing it! I can't wait to read your next project!

Here's to you sweetie! *clink* To a tale told with beautiful imagery, emotional impact and truth to the characters. I for one loved this piece!
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks for much for that wonderful review! I'm especially pleased with how much you enjoyed that section on Dawn. What can I say? I love analyzing the characters, getting into their heads, and the realization of what made Dawn so dang bratty and unlikable in season 6 was enough to make me see her in a gentler light. Hopefully it will help other non-Dawn fans as well!

I'm glad that you liked the story so much, and thank you, THANK YOU for the wonderful review!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 24: Epilogue" from Javian
Review:
Wow.

I adore this story. Amazing characterizations, action, dialogue, everything. And definitely my pick for best Stargate crossover. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! :D I really appreciate the nod of confidence, and I'm delighted that you enjoyed the story! Thank you so much!
Review By [Javian] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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