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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Aprilise
Review:
very very cool story can't wait to find out what happens.

I think it's going to be a very very interesting conversation soon.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Aprilise] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from JoeBobman
Review:
very interesting, well writen and characterized.
I'd very much like to know what happens next, hint hint :)
Review By [JoeBobman] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
LMAO! love the part where jack and daniel thought she was an alien!
Keep up the great work.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Grindhall
Review:
I like it, Well written fight scenes very well done Buffy and SGC hope to see more updates
Review By [Grindhall] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from siannasilver
Review:
Wow, great story and crossover...seamless intro into both worlds. Very impressive. Can't wait to read more. (hint, hint)
Review By [siannasilver] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Fantastic dialog and plot. I loved Buffy's asking for a moment to "absorb" and then concluding she was the "alien slayer." I think if she weren't so worn out, she might have a few thoughts to object to the alien simplification but as it was it worked out perfectly!

I particularly like the body language, location and movment descriptions helping to create a 3 dimensional space in my mind as I read the story.

Oh, and if you don't enter this site from the home page, you might want to take a look at the message about curtailing author's notes. I think you're okay with a general explanation of time and place on this chapter, but you might want to run it by one of the site editors.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kiwi
Review:
i wish i had your excellent writing talent! this story is very well-written! :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spk
Review:
I was so excited to see an update! I LOVE it! Can't wait to see their reactions now that they know she's from SoCal! I hope you're able to update again soon...please!!!! :)
Review By [spk] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from EricThorsen
Review:
Interesting take on the Buffy Falls Through The Portal And Comes Out A Stargate idea... It will be interesting to see where you go with this.
Review By [EricThorsen] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kimbclar
Review:
Excellent chapter. I like how you portrayed Buffy being weak and not wanting to admit it and then coming to the realization she had no choice but to. You've done an excellent job on characterization - for all the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [kimbclar] • Date [11 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Intriguing and fascinating start. Understandable that Buffy breaks down first, but then kicks some butt later.
I wonder what will happen to her now?!
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [5 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from PATM
Review:
This is fun! Maybe not for our heroes but who cares, I'm reading here! There are lots of crossovers in the SG 'verse yet this one
breathes. All the interactions are true and move the story along. Where is t'ealc? I know he's there but at the back of the room,so
to speak, in most of the dialog. Loving It, keep going.
Review By [PATM] • Date [4 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SlayerBunni
Review:
interesting story! i can't wait till buffy kicks their asses! UPDATE SOON! SlayerBunny!
Review By [SlayerBunni] • Date [4 Feb 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Klorel's fiancee was "Bitsy"? Heh, heh. That's a dimunitive of Elizabeth, too, isn't it? Cool continuation. Looking forward to what happens next.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from RyianaT
Review:
Oh wow! Truly an excellent chapter. I can't wait to see Buffy kick Apophis' ass all over the place. :D I love Buffy's shock and then awakening from that shock to kick a lot of Jaffa butt, a la "Anne". And, I cannot wait to see her and Col O'Neill meet. More, more more!
Review By [RyianaT] • Date [3 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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