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TannimReview:
This was a great start. I really like how you're using some little used characters and Apophis's reaction to the sg1 team was subtle and very well done. I also admit to liking the view from buffy's head. Her reactions and reasoning on why she didn't kill Ben was kewl. Keep it up!
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Tannim] • Date [27 Jan 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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VillageOrchidReview:
An interesting concept so far. I like that you don't just have her appear, snarky, alive and problem solving.
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VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jan 06] • Not Rated
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kiwiReview:
Wow! I am amazed! Keep up the GREAT writing! :)
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kiwi] • Date [27 Jan 06] • Not Rated