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Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from Blackett
Review:
Wow. I just found this and I am loving it. I usually don't go for Star Wars stories (which is weird since I consider Star Wars the best movie series ever and that I love the books...kudos for using characters from there by the whey) but I find your story quite good and often funny so I can't wait to read more of it.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your very encouraging review! And I love SW books!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [2 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from Raider
Review:
very well done.

not sure if you were going for comedy at times..but several spots of this chapter amused me.
Comments from author:
Thank you!

Well story classifications are: Crossover, Action, Comedy, Romance, Crossover Universe. So some parts are supposed to be amusing.

Glad they amused you trough.
Review By [Raider] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from hellbells
Review:
yay! glad to see this being continued. Hope to see more soon :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! Yes hopefully it be more soon.
Review By [hellbells] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from AndreaMaine
Review:
I love what you did with this story. With Anikin getting repaired/ healed I wonder with him and Buffy getting wed how long it will be before they have a half-sister or brother for Luke and Leia?
Comments from author:
No comment.... :XD

Thank you for your review!
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from HebiR
Review:
I am pleased this continues. What a great start to the new year!
Comments from author:
Thank you for you review and Happy 2013!
Review By [HebiR] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter in between:Remembrance of love long lost" from grd
Review:
Thank you for continuing this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for sticking around for this story. And waiting for update.
Review By [grd] • Date [1 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "14" from lilacsandroses
Review:
Hello,

I was wondering if you could fix this problem.

The droid tilted his head.
“I accompanied Ladies Buffy and Sache to the party held by some of the acquaintance of Lady Sache and … well later I saw them unconscious. And then some one powered me down, My Lord. I also believe that there was attempt of a memory wipe, but it was unsuccessful.”

As you can see it I do not understand what is being read as. I had that problem myself before it was system fault. I hope you can fix to make it better. Thanks.
Comments from author:
I think I fixed it. Thanks for pointing it out!
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [22 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from chrysanthemum
Review:
Wonderful story! Most of the characters are way OOC, but it's still a very fun read. I especially like your take on Anakin's medical condition and Palpatine's manipulation.

I would be happy to beta a few chapters, if you will write them, although I won't be able to after mid-December. Any updates before then would be much appreciated. Thanks for writing a great story!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yes I think I did Palpatine the most OOC character there. My opinion anyway.

As for beta-I would PM you, but that feature is not available on your profile.
Review By [chrysanthemum] • Date [14 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from lilacsandroses
Review:
Hello,
I just reread this story again and still loving it. Question, will Vader/Anakin learn the truth about his twin children? Will Leia learn the truth about her real father and twin brother Luke? I always thought what they did to the twins was cruel, splitting them up when they should've been with their family, Anakin mother's husband family. I would love to see this particular closure. I'm a firm believer that all siblings should stay together no matter what the circumstances are. Thank you!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I am glad to hear this, it makes me type the chapter(s) faster. (now instead of sloth spread we go in tortoise speed)
Answers to questions: No, he'll know about Luke in two chapters. Not for a while. With Leia there are some difficulties. Mostly her adoptive parents, she does not even know she is adopted yet.
Review By [lilacsandroses] • Date [9 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from deathgeonous
Review:
Was going over some old favorites to add to my recs list and I thought of this one. So I reread it and now am adding it. This is still dang good and I hope for more someday. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Ad it will be, after all I only need to type it, send it to beta reader and post it. XD
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I may have written this before, yet, I do so again. This story is most fascinating!!! I like the relationship between Buffy and Vader/Anakin! It is my hope that Cristina is able to continue with this excellent tale!!
Comments from author:
If it helps....next chapter is already written,....now all it needs is a beta. ;)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ok I give you that...it was really short and didn't tell much so I can't say anything more except to
hope for a new chapter :)
Comments from author:
Now I have a beta reader...so yes there will be new chapter soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just finished rereading the story and I am glad that you got inspired to add a new chapter to the story. :D

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Fritters::

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Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.
- Sir Richard Steele
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Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from annararen
Review:
This is one of the best SW crossover I have read :)
I'm enjoying it immensity.

Thank you for writing and sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XD
Review By [annararen] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from spikeismine
Review:
Dum dum dum. Nice ending. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.
Comments from author:
Will do, after the 6. chapter of Wings of the raven is done.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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