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Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from BrownFinderth
Review:
I may have written this before, yet, I do so again. This story is most fascinating!!! I like the relationship between Buffy and Vader/Anakin! It is my hope that Cristina is able to continue with this excellent tale!!
Comments from author:
If it helps....next chapter is already written,....now all it needs is a beta. ;)
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from (Current Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ok I give you that...it was really short and didn't tell much so I can't say anything more except to
hope for a new chapter :)
Comments from author:
Now I have a beta reader...so yes there will be new chapter soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)Hawklan] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from Dragonelf
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I have just finished rereading the story and I am glad that you got inspired to add a new chapter to the story. :D

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Fritters::

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Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.
- Sir Richard Steele
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Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from annararen
Review:
This is one of the best SW crossover I have read :)
I'm enjoying it immensity.

Thank you for writing and sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. XD
Review By [annararen] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from spikeismine
Review:
Dum dum dum. Nice ending. I can't wait to read more, please update soon.
Comments from author:
Will do, after the 6. chapter of Wings of the raven is done.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from Linauri
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As a perpetual lurker I don't come out of hiding much, but I just wanted to say: YAY you're back! I hope this means more chapters soon? I can't wait to see the meeting with Obi.

Edit: Noticed someone else point out the continuity issue of Buffy knowing about the First in this story and thought I'd point out that the First made an appearance in season 3. It tried to talk Angel into offing himself the Christmas after he came back from Acathla's hell dimension-y place. Don't remember if Buffy knew who the First was at that point, but she did have to face Bringers when she was trying to save Angel in that episode. Hope this helps. :)
Comments from author:
"peaks behind the chair"

I am slow writer, sorry. And I will work at writing The Gift again AFTER I write chapter 6 of Wings of a raven...the I'll, hopefully stick with The Gift till the end of that story.

Considering edit; Thank you for pointing out, while I am well aware of that episode, apparently it was forgotten or missed. I am however glad for your input there.
Thank you.
Review By [Linauri] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from PowerStealerRogue
Review:
This is one of my favorite stories. And my favorite crossover genre. I'd love to beta for you if you still need one . Your loyal fan.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [PowerStealerRogue] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from Rissah
Review:
I'm enjoying the Buff/Vader byplay, but it seems like the last couple of chapters have been really forced. That said, I'm looking forward to where this goes from here. ...and totally loving this unique crossover take. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Update will happen....soon.
Review By [Rissah] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from Lilkitsu
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Rather like the story, though I have noticed a continuity error. I even reread the story to make sure. Buffy went through the portal during the Gift, so therefore she shouldn't know who the First is, or what Bringers are, since she learned about them after being resurrected (though I haven't doublechecked that). As for everything else, I find it very enjoyable.
Comments from author:
First thank you for review. I am glad you like the story. And I appreciate that you are willing to correct things, but it seems you

a) missed an episode in season 3 Amends, (this episode is known that it snowed on Christmas in Sunnydale, California. It is also début of The First Evil and Bringers. The First was trying to turn Angel evil again.
http://www.buffyworld.com/buffy/summaries/044_summ.html

or b) its been a long time since you watched the show.

And I must admit that I caught that episode couple of days before I started to write that chapter, .... with other words I forgot about that episode too.
Review By [Lilkitsu] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from dreameralways
Review:
So... Is he going to hear about the Skywalker family there? Doubt he'd make the connection initially, but Luke is supposed to also be strong in the force, so maybe some questions (if he hears about or senses him)? I can't wait until he meets up with Ben. Should be an interesting reunion. Anyway, love the story and look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Yep the history. And I have the meeting between Sky and Ben (both got nicknames ) noted down..I only need to get to that point of the story, trough won't be long now.

As for Vader recognising his kids, well in cannon he only figured out about Luke, lea went completely over his head and he had far more interaction with her.

So I did the same with Lea...and I'll do the same with Like...eventually.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from bradsan
Review:
Glad you're back. Hope you'll update a lot.
Comments from author:
I am slowpoke with updating...if you haven't notice that yet.

Well more accurate would be with typing since I have whole story planed.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Thanks go to Cristina for continuing to update this terrific story!!
Comments from author:
Thanks go to BrownFinderth for reviewing and kicking my slow writing up.....a notch.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from MrPowell
Review:
Good to see this one back.

If you want I can beta for you, though my turnaround can be somewhat slow.
Comments from author:
I think my writing is slower. But sure, if you still up to it, I'll gladly send you a chapter.
Review By [MrPowell] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from andiesimmo
Review:
yeah glad your back hope you update soon PLEASE
Comments from author:
XD
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 30 : Flying again" from justapiranha
Review:
it's been awhile since your last chapter, is there another one comming soon? that was just enough to remind me how much i like this fic. please?
Comments from author:
sure it will be.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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