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Review of chapter "Songs" from BrownFinderth
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Glad that River was able to return Jayne's favors and make him fly, too!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wave" from BrownFinderth
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Really liked this chapter. Pretty sure that Jayne's the cure for River's what ails her!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conversations" from BrownFinderth
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Very good story the author has going here. I wasn't sure that I'd like reading it, yet, here I am enjoying it!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from Odin
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Fantastic! This story kept me up almost all night, and I had to quit for some sleep before getting up for work. I kept sneaking peaks at work the next day and finished it late the second night. Every chapter kept me wanting more, and at the end it felt like I had lost a good friend. I do hope you eventually write a sequel. Your characters seem to just come to life in story. Thanks for the gift.
Review By [Odin] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from Angelfirenze
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Well, it took far, far longer than it should have, but I've finally finished this masterpiece. Bravo. Just...so much. I loved every bit of it. Thank you for writing this.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [22 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meditating" from Angelfirenze
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I feel wrong for laughing at the end of that chapter. Poor Jayne and Simon. Mal had all this coming. Willow should have stomped harder. Broken a toe or something. Knowing you, everything will work out.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Latin" from Angelfirenze
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Okay. I've tried to keep my...mind-blowness to myself until the end so I can have a proper opinion about everything, but BUT BUT -- *stops, takes breath* If there was any reason I ship River/Jayne, your writing is it.

And MAL/INARA, always a favorite, is totally, TOTALLY amazing. But then you snuck in there with Willow and...there are no words.

Everything is so visceral and awesome and I love how everything is playing out so perfectly, with everyone dancing around one another like the ballets River used to adore.

Oh, OH -- NINE INCH NAILS! I had to play 'Closer' just because. You win at life, here.

*glances at clock and whines* DAMN IT. I have to go to sleep at SOME POINT. So not fair. I keep wanting to read but stuff pulls me away.

The one thing that's in need is a beta to fix typos and what seems to be a problem regarding the word 'woman'. You always pluralize it and write it as 'women', which is incorrect.

But considering the rest of this masterpiece, it took me forever to even remember.

Now one can only hope Kaylee and Simon get their act together some time before canon allowed them to, but since you're working around it, I can be patient and just wait and see.

BRAVO.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [13 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from tryingtobestine
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I do hope you actually do write a sequel, it's a good story :)
Review By [tryingtobestine] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from sdavidm
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Good story so far. You often use 'libel' where you actually mean 'liable'. I generally skip over the smut sections too, but to each his own.
Review By [sdavidm] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from lunalurker
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This was far, far better than I thought it could be. I loved all the relationships and smexy-cuteness and how everything actually worked and made sense, and I do hope there is a sequel! :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from Amai
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This was an awesome story. I don't normally read Willow centric, but I didn't know what the main character cross was when I started, and once I got to River marrying Jayne I was so hooked, I didn't even mind when it turned out to be her. In fact, despite my usual prejudice, I was kinda glad. Any plans to continue through serenity?
Review By [Amai] • Date [16 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from Mierke
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I absolutely loved your Willow. She was written brilliantly. I also loved the Willow/Mal/Inara-triangle, which shouldn't make sense, but really did.

I'm trying to think of some original ways to describe your story itself, but there don't seem to come any to mind. So I'll just repeat myself and say I loved it. You have a great way of intertwining the happenings of Firefly with your own story, and make it seem like Willow belongs there and was there when it happened. And your sex scenes were really hot - I was slightly disappointed Wills/Mal/Nara didn't get to go all the way!

This was brilliant, really.
Review By [Mierke] • Date [27 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from rhiowen
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please please please keep writing more about this story, its amazing. even just up to serenity :(
p.s. a couple of your other stories are some of my favourites too, you kick *ss!
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from moonstarsfu
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I watched some episodes of Firefly yesterday which caused me to have a powerful urge to read this and "Slayers in Space". I think this is like the 7th time I have re-read this story and it is still as awesome as it was the first time I read it. Even though the story is perfect on its own, I hope you still plan to write a sequel as I would love to see what happens next, especially the development of the Nara/Mal/Willow relationship. Again, awesome job. This is still one of my all-time favorite stories.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Objects in Space" from SpacedCadet
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I loved this story!!!

Minor nit, needs some proof-reading: there are some spelling problems and, in a few places, it looks like a word was dropped.

I still loved the story.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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