Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from RavenWoodbane
please update ... I first read this a couple months ago and u had me hook ... since then i've checked the story every month to see if it gets updated and it still hasn't ... so please .... I'm begging you update
Review By [RavenWoodbane
] • Date [26 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from Whimsicality
I love this, you portray Oz so well and bring so much to his own backstory as well seamlessly interweaving him with the NCIS group that this story is up in my top favorites and the only one that doesn't have a 'major' character in it. I love the relationship between Oz and Abby as well as the friendship/respect growing between Oz and McGee. I adore Gibbs and adore Oz and the way you portray them togeth just makes me grin, I'd love to see the redhead comment explored especially given Gibb's own fondness for them. I know this hasn't been updated in years but I would love to see more someday :-)
Review By [Whimsicality
] • Date [13 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from Shieldage
Well darn it! I read this story years ago and Recced it last month, but I've never left a review :/
Guess I'll reread it now. Please update it so it's eligible for the '09 COA awards, definitely stands a chance at winning or at the very least it will increase traffic so more people get a chance to enjoy it :)
Nice use of 'monster' with a double-meaning in Finn's dialogue.
Novak? Heh, Sarah Novak was a character in 'Clean Slate', wonder if that's a reference...
Nice touch having Oz offer Spike moral support :D
--“How bad was the break-up, on a scale of one to ten?” she queried. “One being that you guys get together for coffee –or rather tea, I’m guessing that she drinks tea too- when you’re in town; ten being that blood and guts were decorating the place where you two parted ways.”
Great question to put in her mouth! :D
... And Willow just gave away that she's an American expatriate :)
Hmm, are all the bad guys besides Chip and Cain original? Nice detail on the Sasquatch hunt and aftermath :)
Nice charm from Kate.
Nice work with Tim's POV on the dance floor.
Interesting security measures taken for Oz's house.
And your Jordy sounds like my best friend's younger brother, Eli. Same height, same attitude :)
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SpacedCadet
One minor nit: Tully spoke for the first time. “Agent Osbourne had deliberately left his service revolver behind. If that does not signify a preference toward a peaceful solution, what does?” That should be service PISTOL, it wasn't a revolver.
Review By [SpacedCadet
] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SilverWave
Just re read it, damn this is good.
More would be nice ;)
Review By [SilverWave
] • Date [12 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from Mari
I don't watch NCIS, and have seen it only a few times. That being said, I had no trouble following what was going on, and you made the nonBtVS characters interaction interesting, as well.
When you have the time and inclination, I can't wait to see what happens next. Dare I hope Spike will make another appearance? Preferably with some Buffy interaction?
Review By [Mari
] • Date [13 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from katimaviklindzy
I hope you plan on starting this story up again. It's awsome. Your writting of Abby is great, and I would love to see what would happen if she found out about Oz's secrets.
Review By [katimaviklindzy
] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from XinnLagjin
I love this story. The way you portray OZ is right on the money.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm glad you like my representation.
Review By [XinnLagjin
] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from Heeroluva
Wow, I'm surprised I never stumbled over this story before. I try to read anything and everything that features Oz. Great story. Hope you update someday.
Comments from author:
Oz Is such a great character that I love to use him and do so often, even in my shorts. You might find some fun stuff in my Winter Storms that feature Oz.
Review By [Heeroluva
] • Date [16 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from Kirallie
So who is this Cain Oz is hidding from? Keep up the good work!!!
Review By [Kirallie
] • Date [10 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from rhymneyfaries
I love this. It's so well written and just... good. Please update soon!
Review By [rhymneyfaries
] • Date [7 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from sabellestarte
This is a wonderful story. Very well written. I really hope you continue it.
Review By [sabellestarte
] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DeepBlueJoy
comeon comeon comeon... don't keep us waiting... a slap on the head to you for keeping us waitin'...
this is fun. Please continue...
btw. I like the fact that Gunn's in there, and that you've introduced another black character. Many fics seem to kill off Gunn and Wood, I suspect because they don't know how to write black characters. I would love to see more of Auaraj (sorry about the spelling)
If you can integrate a new powerful slayer character into this, you will have done something really good.
Review By [DeepBlueJoy
] • Date [1 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from chajalive
Wow, I cannot believe how great this story is. If I had known I would have nominated it last month. Are you ever going to continue thought?
Comments from author:
Yes, I have a lot written and planned for this universe, but the chapters are so big that they take a while to complete.
Thanks for the review,
Review By [chajalive
] • Date [13 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four (Club Hoppin')" from jessie
I like it so far, is there more?
Review By [jessie
] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]