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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MusingsOfApathy
Review:
I just love a well written Oz, almost better than a well written Xander, but Oz is infinitely more difficult to write well, the non verbal always are, and Oz is also non-expressive, too mellow to make easy writing. So...good job.

Thank you for writing.

Mike.
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [24 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MusingsOfApathy
Review:
I just love a well written Oz, almost better than a well written Xander, but Oz is infinitely more difficult to write well, the non verbal always are, and Oz is also non-expressive, too mellow to make easy writing. So...good job.

Thank you for writing.

Mike.
Comments from author:
My pleasure.
Thanks for the review
Review By [MusingsOfApathy] • Date [24 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
This just gets more interesting. I do like a well-written Oz fic, and you do such a good job weaving the 'verses without giving too much away. Will they ever get an idea of what Oz's world is like? (Not complaining if they don't--like I said, the not-quite-getting-it is well done, and Oz definitely wouldn't share much.)
Comments from author:
Thank-you very much. I like being considered the writer of a well-written Oz fic. As far as I know, it'll stay along the lines of not-quite-getting-it.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work. I think all your characterizations are just prefect and the banter between everyone sounds just like an episode of NCI. And your Oz is very, very cool. I'm just sorry we will miss his gig at the Black Widow. Lol!
Comments from author:
Miss Oz's gig?

*Looks innocent*
Who said anything about missing Oz's gig?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
Oz is so cool. It's great to have Gunn in the story. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)DonSample
Review:
I'm enjoying this. You've really got the NCIS characters down. One minor technical quibble: revolvers don't have magazines.
Comments from author:
Crud.

so not cool.
My sister (and her fiancé) are going to harass me mercilessly for that mistake. Must fix before they read the story. Thank you very much for pointing it out.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DonSample] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm continuing to enjoy you post-seventh season Oz-centric story a lot. Thanks for adding more of your plot and story!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Sadfru
Review:
Perfect Ozness in a bottle, gonna follow this one closely, is there going to be flashbacks to do with Cain (always wondered what happened to his relationship with that fire demon girl in his one and I think only novel), Riley/army missions etc, I really like the fact that your having willow and Oz have a sense of closeness, but am wondering about the whole lying to the girlfriend thing in second chap when she pretended it was Buffy not Oz on the phone
Comments from author:
I'm glad someone else has read Oz's book too. And flashbacks are a good idea for further chapters. I hope do write some interesting ones.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very good story so far. One word choice in the early part bothered me, though. When someone repeats a name over and over -- it seems to me more like a "chastising" or perhaps even "wicked teasing" moment than one of "attack."
Thanks for sharing the tale.
Comments from author:
hmmm . . . considering
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Brilliant! I so love Oz and he is great in this story! You've got Abby dead on. I didn't have the heart to watch NCIS after they killed Novak.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [16 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very slick. I thought you captured both the feel of the Buffyverse and the NCIverse and blended them perfectly. I hope you eventually return to this alternate universe as I really like Oz and it is nice seeing him operate in a mundane setting. And I really liked the Willow/Oz interaction. But for some very kinky reason I hope I never figure out I wondered what an Abby/Willow/Oz threesome would be like. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

This story will not have an Oz/Abby or a Willow/Oz pairing. I think that's the one thing I can promise.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Kaien
Review:
This has been an interesting read so far. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [Kaien] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ranlynn
Review:
It's alsways a joy to see a well written 'Oz' fic.

And who besided me wants to see what Gibbs will do to Cain for even 'daring' to touch one of his team. Show of hands??
Comments from author:
Me! Me!
But I'm not sure that's going to happen.
Review By [ranlynn] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)romero
Review:
I enjoyed this story and wish you would write more chapters. I love Oz and the way you work in Spike, Buffy and the gang.
Comments from author:
Spike, Buffy and the gang were a bit of an accident. It wasn't until I was about to publish that I realized that I had two additional BtVS characters per chapter. That won't happen for the next chapter, which will done . . . well, whenever it's done.
Review By [(Current Donor)romero] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I don't like Kenedy.
Comments from author:
Kennedy as a character? Kennedy as I wrote her? or Kennedy as Willow's main squeeze?

Any way it goes . . . neither do I.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [13 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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