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Review of chapter "Routine Security Checks" from shimaspawn
Review:
While I certainly do not wish Her Majesty anything of the sort, I quite enjoyed your story. It's surprisingly realistic for something so fantastical.
Review By [shimaspawn] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Routine Security Checks" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Entirely wonderful - thank you so very much.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Routine Security Checks" from Orion
Review:
Good premise, and very well writen to boot. Very good. I do hope you will write a sequel containing the full briefing of the Minister on supernatural events.
Review By [Orion] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Routine Security Checks" from kenwarner
Review:
quite a nice idea, and pretty please, can we get it for the US Senate as well as the Executive and Justice - by their actions I am certain that well over 70% are either voluntarily evil or posessed
good story - very nicely executed for so few words
Thanks
Comments from author:
As to the American government, let me say:

You might very well think so, but I could not possibly comment....
Review By [kenwarner] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Routine Security Checks" from Earthmage
Review:
Most excellent! The Scottish Prime Minister... is he meant to be the one from... oh blast! I've forgotten the name of the comedy programme that's currently on the BBC that spoofs the internal workings of Whitehall. Anyways, absolutely loved it! Hehe... so the Crown doesn't do magic then? Hmm... how does King James I (VI of Scotland)'s obsession with magic and hunting down witches fit in to this new AU?
Comments from author:
The Scottish Prime Minister is meant to be the one who is currently the 'Heir Apparent' to our current incumbent. I've not seen THE THICK OF IT which is the program I think you're referring to.

And given that I've dated the Treaty from the time of Elizabeth I (probably negotiated by Doctor John Dee) I think that James would have gotten a very heavily censored briefing from the Council when he succeeded. And they would have trod very carefully around him until they could establish their bona fides as hunters down of evil sorcerous nasties.
Review By [Earthmage] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Routine Security Checks" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice one! Glad someone found a use for the idea.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [18 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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