Ooo, very interesting story and very interesting idea -- just what would happen if an immortal's first death was by a vampire intent on turning him? Please write more soon and develop this plot!
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [25 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I think I read an earlier version of this story. Whatever you did, you seem to have improved it. This is dark, and harsh, but not without hope. I'd like to see you write some more in this continuity when you get the chance.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I've read this story a couple of times on different sites, isn't it like the very first vamp/immie fic out there, or at least a vamp/immie Xander...anyway, here's hoping for a sequel, that'd be sweet, but I can just imagine the Scoobies response to his change in species