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Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from MinaLynn
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I gotta admit I was sitting here thinking 'who the hell is Jon Carter' and finally I got it. Great surprise--I love it! Another wonderful chapter and a great prophesy along with it!
Comments from author:
Thank you. What was fun is that there were several possibilities for who he could actually be.
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [13 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from Catz
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Beware the scions of the dog who speaks when they come searching for their stolen heir,
For their wrath shall shake the world… (Scooby gang)

The feral father, pack-leader and master of the iron menagerie, shall lead the way. He shall see truly those who intend his son harm and he shall deal with them in his own manner… (Xander)

The twice-dead mother, demon bane and first sister among the destroyers of darkness, shall come seeking the blood-child of her third life, and her rage shall be terrifying to behold. Woe be to any who would stand in her way… (Buffy)

The mistress of gates (Dawn) and her betrothed, the warlord of the ancients (Jon), the wolf-king and his mates, Gaia’s daughter (Willow) and Diana’s favored (Faith), the bloodstained sage, god-killer and heart-father to them all (Giles), and his spouse, the healer and protector of the innocent (Lena), shall aid them in their quest. And the world shall tremble at their step…

Death and destruction shall follow at their heels, and the Boy Who Vanished shall discover and accept his heritage …

The Dark Lord shall seek him out, that the final judgment shall be made, and only one shall walk away…

And the world shall be remade in his image…

So someone is going to take Harry back to the wizarding world, the scoobies are going to come looking and hurt several people in their quest, Harry's going to find out about his birthparents and learn wizarding magic.

Great story so far and an amazing chapter
Comments from author:
You forgot about Oz (the wolf king). ;-)

Thanks. glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Catz] • Date [13 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I intend to.
Review By [APS] • Date [13 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from vMures
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Delightful. Am I correct in guessing that Jon Carter is Jack O'Neill's clone all grown up? I'm really enjoying this story more and more as it goes. This chapter had me giggling out loud several times. Can't wait to read the next part. And yes I did love the shovel bit. :)
Comments from author:
Well, if Jon is not Jack's clone, a lot of people here are going to be really disappointed. ;-)

Hope you liked the shovel bit. ;-)
Review By [vMures] • Date [13 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from (Current Donor)captuniv
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Oh my, Minerva actually got to witness the fraud make an actual prophecy. Bet that went down with a very bitter after-taste. Loved the introduction of O'Neill's clone from Stargate. This story is a hoot and I look forward to the next installment!!
Review By [(Current Donor)captuniv] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from Alianna
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COOL, that was so cool!!! :))
Review By [Alianna] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from Mysticpink
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I found this story funny and very creative , keep going i really like it
Review By [Mysticpink] • Date [12 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from Questara
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I just need to say that was a Freakin' Awesome Prophecy!
Comments from author:
Thank you. ;-)
Review By [Questara] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from LadyFoxFire
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MINI-ME!!!!!! ROFLOL
Comments from author:
;-)
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [12 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from VillageOrchid
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Ahhhh. Uncle Clone O'Neill I presume. Continues to be fun stuff.
Comments from author:
More good stuff to come.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from morange
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sneeking in the mini-jack like that was smoooth man. bravo :)
Comments from author:
thanks.
Review By [morange] • Date [12 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Wow. Awesome prophecy and description of the Scoobies! :-)
Interesting to bring Jack' clone as Jon Carter into this. Will the Scoobies, at least the witches recognize something about him, or Xander as on who sees?
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. ;-)

And there is nothing magical about Jon for the witches to notice.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from TarnishedGold
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OH! A prophecy... looks like we're getting somewhere. Mini-jack as well. Can't wait for more. Gold
Comments from author:
Thanks. More good stuff coming up.
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from (Current Donor)jedibuttercup
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Lots of infodump in this chapter, but very interesting. It still feels like we're in the ramp-up phase to the "real story", as we keep getting little packed bits spread over several years instead of a continuous narrative, but I'm really enjoying seeing all that's going in to the building of this AU. The things Harry is learning and what's happening with the gang in the meantime are all very interesting and emotionally satisfying. Speaking of AU: I loved that you saved Wes and Fred. *hugs Wesley*

I'm mildly amused that you gave Jack's clone Carter's last name; are we going to find out anything more about the current status of the former SG-1 members anytime soon, or is the only participation from that 'verse going to be in the form of Dawn's boyfriend? Regardless, my, what a resource for them he's going to be.

Oh! and "Beware the scions of the dog who speaks" ... *snerk* Great prophecy, and great descriptor for the "Scooby Gang" and its individual members. Dumbledore better write that one down. When the two worlds finally meet again, the fireworks ought to be amazing.
Comments from author:
Yes, it is a bit of set-up for the main chapter, but I wanted to compress the story rather than detail the entirety of Harry's ten years growing up in the Scooby-verse.

I also needed to establish the bona fides for the skills Harry's going to be demonstrating when he finally does start attending Hogwarts, and the best way to do that is show the people he's growing up among. (And I thought Wes and Fred definitely got the dirty end of the stick from Joss in his 'verse, so I fixed that in mine.) ;-)

There'll be more background on Jon in future chapters and probably some minor details on his former comrades, but since they won't be interacting in the main conflict, you won't be seeing much of them.

Glad you liked my description of the Scooby Gang via Trelawney. It's so completely accurate and yet at the same time tells the average listener in the Wizarding World virtually nothing. Just like most prophecies, right? ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [12 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "10 – Revelations (No, Not That Book In The Bible)" from chaosfairyaries
Review:
Is Jon Carter Jack's clone??
Anyway good story keep updating please!
Comments from author:
More will be revealed about Jon in the next chapter.
Review By [chaosfairyaries] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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