I'm continuing to enjoy this story and very grateful for the frequent multi-chapter updates over the past few days. Looking forward to seeing what comes next, whenever you get the chance to update further.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Like many others have mentioned, I'm so glad you decided to post here. I'm hoping new chapters will be coming soon. I can't wait to read their conversation after they leave the base.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay, I really like this story. I liked it on FFNet. Now that TtH has caught up with FFNet, are there going be new chapter soon? Please? (I hope Buffy doesn't thump her dad *too* hard when he introduces her to his "best friend." ;) )
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I remember this story back on FF.Net and had gotten behind when I stopped going over there. If I remember right, I was one of the ones cheering for you to spin this story off of your short. Anyway, glad to see it again and glad to see a lot more story than the last time I read it.
Good job!
Review By [KaylaShay] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is one nifty story. Your characters and their speech paterns are near perfect. I can hear and see them all clearly in my mind's eye as I read. And you have a nice touch with the emotional parts of your story also. I can't wait for more. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Not Rated