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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Ghostdraconi
Review:
I love this fic. No Super Scoobies or Buffy the Jedi Slayer and a fairly unique story. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
many thanks. I'm glad you approve.
Review By [Ghostdraconi] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BeatriceOtter
Review:
I love this story so far, whistler in particular. One note--it's spelled "klepto," short for "kleptomaniac." The "klept-" part is from Greek, I think, which doesn't have the letter "c." In case you were wondering.
Comments from author:
Fixed. Thanks.
Review By [BeatriceOtter] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from ThunderGod
Review:
YAY....a sequel...a good one..lets see what happens now

btw I hate the PTB...they should be killed:}

ThunderGod
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from banner
Review:
I like the way everyone is reacting - your characters are always so believable.
Review By [banner] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from war
Review:
great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SlowMercury
Review:
Still soooo cool! I love your story, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I like the detail about the significance of naming the children, and how the older kids react. Good work!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from jammiesMM
Review:
Cool glad to see a sequel to "Changing the Death Toll" I really liked that story. I do hope the Scoobies get the "message" and don't mess things up. Is there going to be any crossover with SGA that would be so cool. It would be sweet if the powers would send Dawn to be with Buffy & Jack and maybe Giles they could help with the "research" side of bringing up the kids while Jack & Buffy teach them fighting and stratagy and stuff like that. I am not saying that Jack & Buffy are dumb just that they could use some help. But then again it would give Buffy & Jack a chance to grow as well if they didn't have the help. I liked how Whistler told Kennedy she wasn't a big leaguer LOL Update soon and thx for posting!!!!
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I really like the way you have Buffy and Clone!Jack interacting.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [3 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from onlimain
Review:
Jack seems to be very aware of himself. He knows what he has accepted, and what he has yet to fully process. He's very level-minded here whereas Buffy is currently not. I don't know if he knows she's freaking out right now, but at least this shows they can complement each other well. When one of them loses it, the other will stay calm. (Or at least, that's how I picture it happening.) I love how he was able to make Vayla feel useful. Just because she is paralyzed definitely does not mean she is useless.

It's kind of funny how each abduction was handled differently, but the only conclusion each team came to was 'foul play'. Buffy's room was cleaned up and in order, so the Scoobies freaked and immediately went on high alert. For Jack's abduction (or John's, whatever), everything was left as is, as if he was just going to come strolling back any minute. This is what causes *his* team to go on high alert. Maybe the PtB should have thought of switching their kidnapping techniques.

You know, from what I've read in other stories, it has appeared that JackJack didn't seem to care all that much about CloneJack. It's nice to see that at least this version of JackJack was doing *something* in regards to trying to protect CloneJack. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update!
Review By [onlimain] • Date [1 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from onlimain
Review:
First of all, I'd like to join in with all the other fans and say, "Whoo-hoo! You're continuing!" You cannot imagine how happy I was when I got the e-mail update that you had added a new story and found out it was this one. I had hoped and prayed, and you finally answered my prayers. And you're even starting out where I had hoped you would.

Okay, for your story, I'm glad you had Buffy get away from the others for a while. She seemed like she was going to freak, and that is not something she should do around the kids. If they're sensitive to her meditating, they might be sensitive to her temper, too. It's a good thing she was finally able to calm down enough to think 'happy thoughts'. :-D The creatures of the forest have *very* good instincts.

So, for the Scoobies... they're really going to be separated? That's not fair. (Yeah, I know, life isn't fair.) I mean, a group of misfits come together to fight the good fight. They form a powerful front that becomes a force to be reckoned with. They finally find a niche where they belong, and feel accepted. However, they become too much of a powerful force and are ripped from each other's presence to once again start somewhere new as a misfit. See, totally not fair.
Review By [onlimain] • Date [1 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Ezmerelda
Review:
Ha! I love that Kennedy was oh so sharply informed that she's not a major leaguer. She was one of the most annoying characters on the show, and she was only around for a few episodes. I could stand Harmony Kendall longer than I could Kennedy.

Anyway, thrilled to see the sequel off to a good start, thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [Ezmerelda] • Date [1 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banner
Review:
I love everything about this story - "Changing the Death Toll" was terrific, and this one is shaping up beautifully, as well.
Comments from author:
Thankyou. I had to shift gears from 'Action' to . . . and that's the other problem. Would this now be considered 'Drama'? Hmmm . . .

(wanders off to own little world)
Review By [banner] • Date [1 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
I'm eagerly awaiting more. I'm so glad that you've finally got the sequel underway. Thank you.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [28 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spurious
Review:
Woo Hoo! A sequel! Too bad Willow didn't take a bite out of Whistler. Course this time he was smarter and did not hang around. So the PTB is going to scatter the Scoobies?
Review By [spurious] • Date [27 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Yay! So excited to see you do a sequel! great start.
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [27 Feb 06] • Not Rated
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