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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from manic
Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue with this story, I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
No, this story is most definitely not abandoned. Too many people nag so nicely about it.
Review By [manic] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from manic
Review:
The sheer tragedy of Anikan is so compelling. It must be so heart wrenching for Obi-Wan, Qui Gon and to a lesser degree, Yoda. I'm enjoying the fic, love that it has mini-Jack. I'm worried about what kind of reaction there will be on the balance of the force if Willow shows up.
Comments from author:
I'm thankful you enjoyed the fic enough to leave a review. Very much appreciated.
Review By [manic] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from walkerhound
Review:
so Thor's good news is....he get's to keep working with his buddy. i'll bet the council wasn't impressed
Comments from author:
uhm, nope. but I think THor likes yanking their chains.
Review By [walkerhound] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from spurious
Review:
oooh an update. I really like this story. Laughed at the mixed reactions to O'Neill staying at SGC.
Comments from author:
good. than I wasn't being too subtle. Making the story funny is very hard with the Asguard.
Review By [spurious] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hurray for a new chapter, and another good one, too. I particularly enjoy the way you acknowledge the difficulties of having a teenaged metabolism and a lifetime of military experience -- O'Neill's reluctant waking up was a delight to read, and felt very realistic. Plus, Thor's idea of "good news / bad news" really hit the spot (he's obviously been hanging out with O'Neill too much).
Comments from author:
I'm very glad that the chapter came across as believable. That, of course, is the goal.

And Thor is fun.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Beneficia
Review:
SQUUEEEEEEL!! You updated! I like the Jack/Ro'hane interaction and the baby naming. Can Wookies' vocal cords make human noises? I'm kinda worried Bra'tac's not gonna be able to vocally communicate while growing up. And I wonder if Buffy's going to be happy that Jack's taken care of naming more of the babies, or upset he's hogging the baby-naming job. Update soon!
Comments from author:
No Wookies can't, which leads to all sorts of fun (for me, not Buffy and Jack)

Uhm. I hadn't thought about that, Jack naming behind Buffy's back. I'll have to address that.
Review By [Beneficia] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from redrikki
Review:
You updated this story! YAY! Now can I have some more please?
Comments from author:
;p~~~~

sigh
;p~
give me time, please?
Review By [redrikki] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
This was a good chapter. The start--with Jack slowly remember where and what he was was excellent. Transitioning to the children was well done--and I particularly liked the little Wookie/hairy little beast/Bra'tac bit.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, it fought with me from day one, glad to have it finished. Perhaps Ro'hane will be better behaved than Jack . . . well, we can hope.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from alexceasar
Review:
Hmm. The Council doesn't like Jack as much, huh? Good idea to name the little Wookie after Bra'tac. I liked the reason behind it too. Good chapter. Look foward to more.
Comments from author:
I was ridiculously proud of myself for that naming, I'm glad someone else appreciated it.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Great to see a new chapter. :-)
More soon? ;-)
Comments from author:
hoping . . . but it will be a couple of weeks. I have other things to post in the meantime.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from war
Review:
stuck on a hostile planet without coffee that is truly horrible.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
It makes for cranky characters, which makes cranky writers and we can't have that.
Review By [war] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from VivianCaidin
Review:
I always enjoy stories with Jack O'Neill's clone. I'm glad you're continuing with the storyline. Can't wait to see more.

VC
Comments from author:
Me too.

Working on it as much as RL allows.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It was supposed to go one way but Jack dug in his heels and refused so it's a kinda bleh chapter that sets up the following.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Arjai
Review:
An odd convoluted tale, but well worth the reading! Wish I could offer suggestions but you seem to be doing quite well on your own. Oddly Willow and Giles are my favorites, in BtVS, and Clone-Jack is one of my favs in SG-1. Just remember a little Faith can always be of aid. (pun fully intended).
Review By [Arjai] • Date [28 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SlowMercury
Review:
I continue to be amazed by this story. I love it. It's interesting how Vayla and Ro'hane don't even seem to register Buffy's words about them being special targets of evil. I can't wait to see what they decide about being Jedi, part-Jedi or non-Jedi, and I'm glad Qui-Gon approves.

I'm guessing that Willow won't be coming back from her trip, if the PTB are splitting the Scooby Gang. I hope Kennedy can follow her to wherever she ends up; it would be very sad otherwise.

[update] I periodically return to this fic to see if you've added anything new. No luck this time, but I still love this story/series, so I've re-read it and would like to use this opportunity to remind you that I love you, because this is a kick-ass story. I really want to know what happens next. Is Willow going to the SG universe? (That would be cool, and she could do a lot of good there.) Can Dawn make it all the way to Buffy? She seems lost without her sister, and Jack and Buffy could definitely use the help. And even though the Powers are splitting the major players, Dawn is pretty non-threatening. She may have a dangerous mind, but depending on how you write her the only thing special about her is potential Key-ness lingering. Aside from that, she's totally human; she hasn't got the strength/skill of a Slayer or the magic of Willow, or even Giles.

If, as I think you indicated somewhere, you don't want to name ALL the OC babies, you don't have to. You can just elide that part of the story by having Jack and Buffy name the kids offscreen. The younglings will know what the names are and so will Jack and Buffy, but since the characters are babies there's probably not that much character developement necessary. At this point, the babies are still young enough that they're something stuff happens to, not someones who cause stuff to happen.
Comments from author:
I'm glad the story's still interesting to some people. ANd the younglings are going to figure it out with trial and error.

And you're the first to guess that part about Willow.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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