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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
This is good I am enjoying it. I look forward to more when you can do so.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Dara
Review:
Yay! A new chappie!!! ^-^
That just made my day, Thankies!
Update soon, please?
Review By [Dara] • Date [27 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Great new chapter! I really hope you keep updating this (more frequently, preferably). :-D The upcoming part with Willow is definitely going to be "interesting".

And if it's chocolate bribes you're looking for, how about some Dilletante Chocolates? Some of the best stuff I've ever tasted, made in Seattle, Washington, USA. I would be more than happy to send you a pound once this story is finished. ;-) The link to Dilletante's website is http://www.dilletante.com
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [22 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from manic
Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue with this story, I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
No, this story is most definitely not abandoned. Too many people nag so nicely about it.
Review By [manic] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from manic
Review:
The sheer tragedy of Anikan is so compelling. It must be so heart wrenching for Obi-Wan, Qui Gon and to a lesser degree, Yoda. I'm enjoying the fic, love that it has mini-Jack. I'm worried about what kind of reaction there will be on the balance of the force if Willow shows up.
Comments from author:
I'm thankful you enjoyed the fic enough to leave a review. Very much appreciated.
Review By [manic] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from walkerhound
Review:
so Thor's good news is....he get's to keep working with his buddy. i'll bet the council wasn't impressed
Comments from author:
uhm, nope. but I think THor likes yanking their chains.
Review By [walkerhound] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from spurious
Review:
oooh an update. I really like this story. Laughed at the mixed reactions to O'Neill staying at SGC.
Comments from author:
good. than I wasn't being too subtle. Making the story funny is very hard with the Asguard.
Review By [spurious] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hurray for a new chapter, and another good one, too. I particularly enjoy the way you acknowledge the difficulties of having a teenaged metabolism and a lifetime of military experience -- O'Neill's reluctant waking up was a delight to read, and felt very realistic. Plus, Thor's idea of "good news / bad news" really hit the spot (he's obviously been hanging out with O'Neill too much).
Comments from author:
I'm very glad that the chapter came across as believable. That, of course, is the goal.

And Thor is fun.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Beneficia
Review:
SQUUEEEEEEL!! You updated! I like the Jack/Ro'hane interaction and the baby naming. Can Wookies' vocal cords make human noises? I'm kinda worried Bra'tac's not gonna be able to vocally communicate while growing up. And I wonder if Buffy's going to be happy that Jack's taken care of naming more of the babies, or upset he's hogging the baby-naming job. Update soon!
Comments from author:
No Wookies can't, which leads to all sorts of fun (for me, not Buffy and Jack)

Uhm. I hadn't thought about that, Jack naming behind Buffy's back. I'll have to address that.
Review By [Beneficia] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from redrikki
Review:
You updated this story! YAY! Now can I have some more please?
Comments from author:
;p~~~~

sigh
;p~
give me time, please?
Review By [redrikki] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
This was a good chapter. The start--with Jack slowly remember where and what he was was excellent. Transitioning to the children was well done--and I particularly liked the little Wookie/hairy little beast/Bra'tac bit.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it, it fought with me from day one, glad to have it finished. Perhaps Ro'hane will be better behaved than Jack . . . well, we can hope.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from alexceasar
Review:
Hmm. The Council doesn't like Jack as much, huh? Good idea to name the little Wookie after Bra'tac. I liked the reason behind it too. Good chapter. Look foward to more.
Comments from author:
I was ridiculously proud of myself for that naming, I'm glad someone else appreciated it.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Great to see a new chapter. :-)
More soon? ;-)
Comments from author:
hoping . . . but it will be a couple of weeks. I have other things to post in the meantime.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from war
Review:
stuck on a hostile planet without coffee that is truly horrible.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
It makes for cranky characters, which makes cranky writers and we can't have that.
Review By [war] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from VivianCaidin
Review:
I always enjoy stories with Jack O'Neill's clone. I'm glad you're continuing with the storyline. Can't wait to see more.

VC
Comments from author:
Me too.

Working on it as much as RL allows.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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