Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from WhiteWolf
Comments from author:
Thanks. It was supposed to go one way but Jack dug in his heels and refused so it's a kinda bleh chapter that sets up the following.
Review By [WhiteWolf
] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Arjai
An odd convoluted tale, but well worth the reading! Wish I could offer suggestions but you seem to be doing quite well on your own. Oddly Willow and Giles are my favorites, in BtVS, and Clone-Jack is one of my favs in SG-1. Just remember a little Faith can always be of aid. (pun fully intended).
Review By [Arjai
] • Date [28 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SlowMercury
I continue to be amazed by this story. I love it. It's interesting how Vayla and Ro'hane don't even seem to register Buffy's words about them being special targets of evil. I can't wait to see what they decide about being Jedi, part-Jedi or non-Jedi, and I'm glad Qui-Gon approves.
I'm guessing that Willow won't be coming back from her trip, if the PTB are splitting the Scooby Gang. I hope Kennedy can follow her to wherever she ends up; it would be very sad otherwise.
[update] I periodically return to this fic to see if you've added anything new. No luck this time, but I still love this story/series, so I've re-read it and would like to use this opportunity to remind you that I love you, because this is a kick-ass story. I really want to know what happens next. Is Willow going to the SG universe? (That would be cool, and she could do a lot of good there.) Can Dawn make it all the way to Buffy? She seems lost without her sister, and Jack and Buffy could definitely use the help. And even though the Powers are splitting the major players, Dawn is pretty non-threatening. She may have a dangerous mind, but depending on how you write her the only thing special about her is potential Key-ness lingering. Aside from that, she's totally human; she hasn't got the strength/skill of a Slayer or the magic of Willow, or even Giles.
If, as I think you indicated somewhere, you don't want to name ALL the OC babies, you don't have to. You can just elide that part of the story by having Jack and Buffy name the kids offscreen. The younglings will know what the names are and so will Jack and Buffy, but since the characters are babies there's probably not that much character developement necessary. At this point, the babies are still young enough that they're something stuff happens to, not someones who cause stuff to happen.
Comments from author:
I'm glad the story's still interesting to some people. ANd the younglings are going to figure it out with trial and error.
And you're the first to guess that part about Willow.
Review By [SlowMercury
] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from pnrocco
i very much enjoyed this and would like to read moreplease
Review By [pnrocco
] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from MamaLadyWolf
Love it, More Please Way More please. Thank you.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf
] • Date [20 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Sulien
8-l Another excellent story! The characterizations are spot on. I just hope you plan on finishing it!
*shuffles away mumbling "I hate bloody works in progress!!!"*
Review By [Sulien
] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Claddagh
I really love this fic. I am not a big SW fan (at least not since Luke Han Lando and Leia) but your fic makes me interested. I hope you update soon
Review By [Claddagh
] • Date [28 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from APS
keep up the good work.
Added author/story to my Alert list.
Review By [APS
] • Date [17 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SADDAMINSANE
I like this are you doing another sequel?
Review By [SADDAMINSANE
] • Date [11 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Dacl
Very interesting fic you have, though there have been Jedi who have fallen and come back from the Dark side. It was more common in ancient times; however it had been known to happen even in the more recent times. Aayla Secura is one of the Jedi who fell (or came very near) and came back, though she isn’t the most extreme case. The most Extreme case, on the level of Darth Vader, is the Prodigal Knight Revan, who was at one time a Sith Lord by the name of Darth Revan, though it wasn’t his choice to come back from the Dark side. I have included some links that I think might help you out.http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Aayla_Securahttp://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Revan
Review By [Dacl
] • Date [10 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Gylzgurl
This is the first xover of BtVS with Star Wars that I've ever read. I've never even seen any of the Star Wars movies. But your story sounded very interesting so I decided to give it a chance. I'm glad I did. It's extremely good. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.
Review By [Gylzgurl
] • Date [28 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from immortalsilence
oooohhh more chapters pretty please, im loving the sequel.
Review By [immortalsilence
] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from arkeus
wow... Good. Really, really hope that willow is not making a mistake by searching for buffy. At least she doesn't just make a spell to bring her back.
Review By [arkeus
] • Date [17 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from debio
More please!!! I love this story!
Review By [debio
] • Date [13 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from RevDorothyL
Still totally hooked on this. Could be the start of a beautiful, super-powered, snarky family-with-Jedi-home-schooling! And I love any author who can make such believable and respectful use of Col. O'Neill's younger self.
[update: Thanks for the suggestion: I read and utterly loved your Clone!Jack and Clone!Jarod SG1/Pretender crossover fic. Any more Clone!Jack fics you could direct me to?]
Comments from author:
Many thanks. I'm glad that other people have as much fun reading as I do writing. And I love working with Clone!Jack.
If you're interested, I have a (longish) story posted at Wormhole Crossing (link in my bio) called Clone to Clone. It's a cross with Pretender. It's quite fun.
Review By [RevDorothyL
] • Date [12 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]