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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from war
Review:
stuck on a hostile planet without coffee that is truly horrible.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
It makes for cranky characters, which makes cranky writers and we can't have that.
Review By [war] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from VivianCaidin
Review:
I always enjoy stories with Jack O'Neill's clone. I'm glad you're continuing with the storyline. Can't wait to see more.

VC
Comments from author:
Me too.

Working on it as much as RL allows.
Review By [VivianCaidin] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It was supposed to go one way but Jack dug in his heels and refused so it's a kinda bleh chapter that sets up the following.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [18 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Arjai
Review:
An odd convoluted tale, but well worth the reading! Wish I could offer suggestions but you seem to be doing quite well on your own. Oddly Willow and Giles are my favorites, in BtVS, and Clone-Jack is one of my favs in SG-1. Just remember a little Faith can always be of aid. (pun fully intended).
Review By [Arjai] • Date [28 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SlowMercury
Review:
I continue to be amazed by this story. I love it. It's interesting how Vayla and Ro'hane don't even seem to register Buffy's words about them being special targets of evil. I can't wait to see what they decide about being Jedi, part-Jedi or non-Jedi, and I'm glad Qui-Gon approves.

I'm guessing that Willow won't be coming back from her trip, if the PTB are splitting the Scooby Gang. I hope Kennedy can follow her to wherever she ends up; it would be very sad otherwise.

[update] I periodically return to this fic to see if you've added anything new. No luck this time, but I still love this story/series, so I've re-read it and would like to use this opportunity to remind you that I love you, because this is a kick-ass story. I really want to know what happens next. Is Willow going to the SG universe? (That would be cool, and she could do a lot of good there.) Can Dawn make it all the way to Buffy? She seems lost without her sister, and Jack and Buffy could definitely use the help. And even though the Powers are splitting the major players, Dawn is pretty non-threatening. She may have a dangerous mind, but depending on how you write her the only thing special about her is potential Key-ness lingering. Aside from that, she's totally human; she hasn't got the strength/skill of a Slayer or the magic of Willow, or even Giles.

If, as I think you indicated somewhere, you don't want to name ALL the OC babies, you don't have to. You can just elide that part of the story by having Jack and Buffy name the kids offscreen. The younglings will know what the names are and so will Jack and Buffy, but since the characters are babies there's probably not that much character developement necessary. At this point, the babies are still young enough that they're something stuff happens to, not someones who cause stuff to happen.
Comments from author:
I'm glad the story's still interesting to some people. ANd the younglings are going to figure it out with trial and error.

And you're the first to guess that part about Willow.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from pnrocco
Review:
i very much enjoyed this and would like to read moreplease
Review By [pnrocco] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from MamaLadyWolf
Review:
Love it, More Please Way More please. Thank you.
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [20 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
8-l Another excellent story! The characterizations are spot on. I just hope you plan on finishing it!

*shuffles away mumbling "I hate bloody works in progress!!!"*
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [4 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Claddagh
Review:
I really love this fic. I am not a big SW fan (at least not since Luke Han Lando and Leia) but your fic makes me interested. I hope you update soon
Review By [Claddagh] • Date [28 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Added author/story to my Alert list.
Review By [APS] • Date [17 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from SADDAMINSANE
Review:
I like this are you doing another sequel?
Review By [SADDAMINSANE] • Date [11 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Dacl
Review:
Very interesting fic you have, though there have been Jedi who have fallen and come back from the Dark side. It was more common in ancient times; however it had been known to happen even in the more recent times. Aayla Secura is one of the Jedi who fell (or came very near) and came back, though she isn’t the most extreme case. The most Extreme case, on the level of Darth Vader, is the Prodigal Knight Revan, who was at one time a Sith Lord by the name of Darth Revan, though it wasn’t his choice to come back from the Dark side. I have included some links that I think might help you out.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Aayla_Secura
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Revan
Review By [Dacl] • Date [10 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Gylzgurl
Review:
This is the first xover of BtVS with Star Wars that I've ever read. I've never even seen any of the Star Wars movies. But your story sounded very interesting so I decided to give it a chance. I'm glad I did. It's extremely good. I can't wait to read more. I hope you update soon.
Review By [Gylzgurl] • Date [28 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from immortalsilence
Review:
oooohhh more chapters pretty please, im loving the sequel.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [21 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from arkeus
Review:
wow... Good. Really, really hope that willow is not making a mistake by searching for buffy. At least she doesn't just make a spell to bring her back.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [17 Apr 06] • Not Rated
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