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Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Toniboo
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hey there. i've just re-read this series for like the thirtieth time and i have to admit that i really enjoy it. it is very well written and the characterisation is spot on. on that note, i know it has been nearly 3 years but i 'm wondering if u are planning to continue this fic at all? i really hope you are! anyways i would appreciate it if you could let me know either way?!

thanks for reading!
toniboo
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Toniboo
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hey there. i've just re-read this series for like the thirtieth time and i have to admit that i really enjoy it. it is very well written and the characterisation is spot on. on that note, i know it has been nearly 3 years but i 'm wondering if u are planning to continue this fic at all? i really hope you are! anyways i would appreciate it if you could let me know either way?!

thanks for reading!
toniboo
Review By [Toniboo] • Date [13 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from malchance
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Aaaakk! Please don't tell me that this story is abandoned. This has become one of my favorite crossovers and I would hate for it to never be finished. I love clone!Jack stories and to see him as a daddy to all of the baby Jedi is just wonderful. Also, I have never cared for any Star Wars fics that are not from the original trilogy, but this one has me riveted. Can't wait to see how Buffy and Jack's relationship develops. Please update soon.
Review By [malchance] • Date [4 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from fran
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I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from LetsRandom
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I really enjoyed your series up until now, because I can't keep reading chapters that don't exist. I hope you eventually come back and update this!
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Robby
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Awesome story idea, I have never seen one like it before!!! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Keep up the great work!!!!!
Review By [Robby] • Date [23 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from lucyferr
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Once Jack remembered –realized- that no one was expecting him to act like a teenager, he let the persona drop. He relished being himself. He liked being in charge. He loved having people take him seriously. He liked having someone to care for. The man –or was he a teen?- was a born caretaker.

v good!

It was odd. If the two of them had met on Earth, assuming that they were both from the same Earth, Buffy and Jack would never had shared such secrets within two weeks of meeting. They probably would not have shared the secrets at all and would have let their pasts destroyed any budding relationship that might have occurred. Here, their working relationship had to work.

ditto

...shook their heads at the importance Master Buffy seemed to put on independent thought. Buffy knew that they didn’t understand the difference between good obedience and bad obedience. They would learn and hopefully there wouldn’t be blood to make the lessons stick. Buffy remembered the lessons she had learned about good disobedience and bad disobedience. She remembered the lessons that Willow and Xander had learned the hard way.

i like that too

Good job naming the toddlers in dribs and drabs instead of all at once

Giles had lost the argument at that point. He just hadn’t known it yet. He had finally agreed to Buffy’s idea. He had agreed so as to foster a better relationship with his estranged Slayer, he had done it because she was trying to be somewhat responsible with her budget, but most of all, Giles had agreed because it was the only argument that Buffy had involved herself in with her normal passion. After Buffy had disappeared, Giles had followed through with his side of the agreement because his Slayer might return someday.

That's the weirdest Manolo Blahnik story ever... :-) ... also, poignant Giles pov

“Bullocks,” Giles swore.
==>
“Bollocks,” Giles swore. (or)
“Bollocks!” Giles swore.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from lucyferr
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Jack eyed the cowboy hat on the CD cover. Country? Boy, the clone had become different from him in a relatively short time. Jack shrugged and packed it all. Was it a peak into Jack’s soul or the clone’s? Was it both? Did Jack want to consider all these thought provoking questions? No.

lol - also deep
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from lucyferr
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I hope that was just a cameo by Capn Jack, woulda been character bloat otherwise! :-)
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from lucyferr
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good talk btwn R & V - they take it very well
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from lucyferr
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Great talk Buffy has with Jack, esp abt Willow & the temptations for the two oldest kids. Though I'm still not sure if Willow's wrong, I'm judging by the rules of my universe, not Buffy's magical one.

nice pov of qg at the end.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from lucyferr
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enjoying the stories of those left behind
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from lucyferr
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No, from Buffy’s fighting style and meditation control, she was a Master. Vayla finally accepted that though Buffy was not a Jedi, she was Master Warrior.
The petite blonde rolled her eyes. “No, the stupid PTB’s invade my sleep to torture me with cryptic messages that don’t really help anyone and just causes me to loose rest.”
Master Buffy’s opinion was very different from the Jedi’s.

good one

“I’m sticking my tongue out at you,” Buffy tossed over her shoulder.
Vayla leaned back in Master Buffy’s arms to view the woman’s face. “But you aren’t,” she said confused. Vayla heard Colonel Jack laughing.

lol

“I do not understand, Master Buffy,” Sabè spoke for the first time since leaving the ship behind. “Your words are easier to comprehend when you speak as a . . . ‘tweed-encased Brit’. Is that not preferable?”
Colonel Jack was now laughing so hard he had to rest his hands on his knees to regain breath.

oh i do like Vayla

In his mind’s eye, Jack saw Daniel scaling the walls, calling out observations and just being excited about the possibilities. Jack was cataloguing more of the temple than escape routes and defensible positions; he was seeing the cultural ramifications of such a building. That was all Daniel’s fault. The fact that the word ‘Mayan’ was whispering in his thoughts was Daniel’s fault too.

awww Danny would be so proud
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lucyferr
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“That’s your fault,” Jack shot back. “You being so immature is forcing me to be the mature one.”
Buffy was unrepentant. “There’s a time for maturity. This isn’t it.”

lol

good excuse using Thor et al to give Jack 2.0 a few extra 'gifts'.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from lucyferr
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good comment about none of the kids being a Daniel... after all, Jedis take orders. Daniel, well, not so much.

“Buffy, you’re deliberately being difficult. Please talk . . . better.”

yes, for the sake of the poor kiddies :-)

ps : mie furrer -> Mein Fuhrer... or Mein Führer if you really want to get strict
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [10 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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