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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spk
Review:
WOW!! Still loving this story! You are doing a great job describing the grief they are all experiencing. I love that you had Whistler come explain everything to the Scoobies. Can't wait to see what happens with Buffy's decision. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing and the compliment, yes I thought Whistler would be an interesting choice. Especially effective in sending Willow on a guilt trip. Yes I was trying to show how grief can cause people to do things they normally wouldn't think of doing.

As for Buffy's decision you'll have to keep reading to find out, that will not be resolved for a little while because as in real life other things get in the way.
Review By [spk] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Bumblebee
Review:
I love it!! The background info was great and I love the bond between Buffy and Legolas was just wondering if they will dream walk.Whislter putting Willow in her place very nice. Once again love it and update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review again. The bond between Buffy and Legolas has a large part to play. I believe the dream walking thing being part of the bond was used by another author whose story I had read and did inspire some of the ideas for my own version. If you know which story and author, please let me know and I will be more than happy to acknowledge that.

Thank you for the compliment on the background as that part of the chapter was the hardest part to write. I actually thought I was giving away too much too soon.
Review By [Bumblebee] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jammiesMM
Review:
Well I am glad Whistler explained things but I still hope Buffy gives them a good talking to about doing things without getting all the info. And doing things that are just plain wrong and stupid. Just because you can doesn't mean you should. I hope Buffy goes back to Middle Earth. A new slayer called? What happened to Faith? The slayer line goes through her now did The Powers decide to call another slayer instead of getting Faith out of prison? Or did something happen to Faith in prison? Thx for posting update soon
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing. From your comments it would seem that you too have given much thought to this subject. I wrote this partly for my own benefit and as the story title suggests it is about what people do in the name of love. So while I agree with your comments about Willow's interference, I also wanted to show that it too was done for love.

As for Faith and the new slayer, well you know how fickle the PTB are. Also knowing that Faith had broken the rules about who she is allowed to kill, they considered her too unstable and another was called. However for the purposes of this story that persons identity is irrelevant. I really put that in to emphasise the the PTB have no further interest in Buffy, since she no longer has her powers.

I hope that these explanations do not put you off reading the story.
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [10 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cassie
Review:
whoa great start hope there is more soon
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review, I am glad you like it and yes I hope to put another chapter up by the weekend, so hang in there.
Review By [Cassie] • Date [6 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Fan2
Review:
What can I say? I am speechless!
Comments from author:
Thank you for letting me know how you liked my story. Since you gave me 10/10 I will assume you being speechless is a good thing.

I hope you will get your voice back by the time the next chapter goes up. I originally started writing this as a gift for a friend around the middle of last year, but I never managed to get it finished by any of the regular celebrations. Anyway decided I would post it so I could get another view on whether it was any good or not and to make sure I had ironed out any bugs.

I hope you will continue to enjoy future chapters.
Review By [Fan2] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chelsea
Review:
Excellent start! I'm betting Buffy will be pissed and I'm really hoping she tells them off! I love reading Buffy/Legolas pairings. You've done an amazing job with the first chapter...I can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind comments, it is strange that you mention Buffy/Legolas pairings.One of the reasons I put this story on this website was I couldn't seem to find any. Please let me know it you know of any others.
I am glad it wasn't confusing seeming to start in the middle of the story. Yes Buffy is upset and yes she does tell them off.
Review By [Chelsea] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BkwrmDancer
Review:
wow, this is really good so far, I love Legolas' reaction to Buffy being torn away, this is really really promising, I hope you update soon and regularly . . .
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review and Legolas reaction is my favourite part of this chapter. I have written most of this up to chapter 18 but am stuck on 14 at the moment. Still should be able to update regularly.

I am concerned about the fact that the italics didn't transfer when I copied the text, so the story may become a little confusing later. Any suggestions on other ways to show the elven and its translation would be great.
Review By [BkwrmDancer] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bumblebee
Review:
The beginning is great! I always love Buffy/Legolas pairing. I cant wait to find out about the baby and to see what you do to Willow. Please update soon!!
Comments from author:
Thank you for your kind review. I admit I had thought to have Buffy throw a knife at Willow but my beta reader suggested that would be too much. Still I promise you that Willow will definitely get the message. Chapter 2 will contain the first telling off and from an unexpected source, so stay tuned.

As for the baby well you will just have to wait and see.
Review By [Bumblebee] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
Review:
Definitely a great start. It's funny...I was just thinking that people don't write LotR crossovers much anymore. I am so glad to see this. Can't wait to see what you do with it. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the positive review and I agree. Lord of the Rings crossovers are my particular favourite at the moment. I hope you will continue to enjoy this as it does take on a couple of interesting twists.
Review By [spk] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jammiesMM
Review:
Well I for one hope Buffy beats the crap outta someone or at least gives them a darn good tough lashing. Or maybe Xander will for once stand up to Willow and tell her off. Xander isn't one of my favs but I think it would be better coming from him then anyone since he is Willow's oldest & first friend. Anyway this is very interesting please continue soon. thx for posting.
Comments from author:
Thank you for reading and your welcome. Yes someone will get a tongue lashing as well. I hope you don't mind but Xander and Anja don't feature much in this as I had a large group to manage so some will only play very minor parts.

Chapter 2 will contain some tongue lashing from an unexpected source, so don't worry about that.
Review By [jammiesMM] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from NoLifeKing
Review:
Fascinating start. :-)
I wonder where this will go. How and when will the two be reunited?
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review. It has a couple of twists and turns including the answer to your question, so I am afraid I can't give it away just yet. Please be patient and I will try and get the next chapter up soon.
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [4 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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