Review of chapter "Chapter One" from christytrekkie
Wow that was quite interesting.
Review By [christytrekkie
] • Date [1 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
This is wonderful so far. Please please tell me that you WILL finish this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring
] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Angelfirenze
Well, hell. I really want you to finish this. It's awesome so far and I'd love to know where you'd take it.
Review By [Angelfirenze
] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from forlornfeline
I adore this. I was going to try to do one but I can't do this good.
Very nice. I really liked Cole a lot.
Review By [forlornfeline
] • Date [29 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ReflectionsOfReality
I sort of stumbled across this story by accident as I was checking out your Luggage story (haven't read Pratchett but love everything I have read based on his stories, and why hasn't anyone written a decent length story with him/it?)... I read your other 6th Sense one first and thought eh, (written well but not much point of further plot development and it gave enough time for the yellow crayon incident if it truly was in line with cannon) then I read this one and I was really impressed and was hoping for more so I looked for your web page and amazingly I already follow some of your Harry Potter stories...
There are so many possibilities for this story from the basic of Xander doing nothing but giving Cole some sort of charm to ward off ghosts or maybe one that can act like an answering machine... leave your haunting message from the other-side at the tone and I will get back to you when I have time available and not about to have a mental breakdown... to Xander becoming a mentor or role model to Cole to maybe even father figure... the other thing I was thinking about is what better psychiatrist to the forces that fight the undead every night than a ghost himself (Bruce Willis, what ever happens if a ghost accepts death but does not move on?) Then I further expanded the thoughts to the reaction of the rest of the Scoobies (from seeing this as an example why Xander should move on with his life to thinking that the first was back, to trying to bind Xander's powers so as he wouldn't stop being the Zeppo, or to even have him committed) as well as what Cole's mother's reaction to him bringing home a strange man...
Do you think you are going to write the next chapter anytime soon?
Review By [ReflectionsOfReality
] • Date [25 Mar 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jorrie
This is real interesting stuff. I really hope you continue with it soon. Please hurry! Pretty please with a cherry on top! Hahaha. It's real good. Can't wait for something new! Ta! ^_~
Review By [Jorrie
] • Date [9 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
Very good start... I really hope you do continue it. :)
Review By [Ladeia
] • Date [6 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Almadynis
Interesting idea...keep them up!
Review By [Almadynis
] • Date [29 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kyuubi
Just wanted to say wow! I'm surprised there isn't more stories in this genre due to Xander being the One Who Sees. So yeah! I just wanted to tell that I really like this story. I am really looking forward to more of it if you decide to continue I think this has real potential to be a great long read! ^_^ Anyway great job and may your muse never fly away.
Review By [Kyuubi
] • Date [4 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
sweet work, i really hope to see more
Review By [Bobboky
] • Date [29 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JayCee
I give this only an 8 due to the fact you make us want more.... love the story and want more. it is nice to see Xander in a big brother type of setting. JC
Review By [JayCee
] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from angelusluv
new chapter please
Review By [angelusluv
] • Date [5 Jul 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KaylaShay
Xander helping Cole is cool,
It's neat that they both see the ghoul.
I hope you continue with more and more,
I'll even rate this a ten instead of four.
Review By [KaylaShay
] • Date [14 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grouchie
this is the first time i read a sixth sense crossover. you did a great job with it. it will be interesting to see where you take it. where did Xander get his eye?
Review By [grouchie
] • Date [13 Mar 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]