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Vegas Vacation

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Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from TorturedAngel
Review:
really good read. I wasnt so sure if I'd be all that interested at first since I usually read fics with pairings. But this was really good. And sad at the end with Xander's mom running off like that, but then again I didn't see them having a very good relationship anyways. But still sad for Xander to have his hopes broken in such a way. :(
Really good fic, thanks! :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from ObsidianBlack
Review:
Very good story. I enjoyed the Xander interogation scene.

One flaw, though. Warren's body couldn't have been discovered, charred or otherwise, as it was completely destroyed. Vanished into nothing after the fire. I checked the BuffyWorld.com transcript for Villians, just to be sure. Your brother might wanna change that part.

Now, he better give you feedback.
Review By [ObsidianBlack] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from MBB
Review:
Great story, very good Xander-Riley interaction/friendship.
I don't watch CSI,, but the story was still easy to follow.

And you should feedback your brother.
Review By [MBB] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from Sunstar
Review:
I liked Greg's thought process. Having xander fin his mom was a little sad. Your characterization of everyone was wonderful, and xander conversation with brass was very snarky.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from Kaien
Review:
This was...just awesome. I just about peed my pants during the scene with Brass and Xander when they were discussing the stakes. And when Xander told Andrew that Giles wanted to see Star Wars...just hilarious, and truly evil. The ending was...vaguely unsatisfying. It was good, it tied everything up, I was just hoping for more, I guess. Would love to see a sequel. Maybe Greg and the CSI guys run into some gangs on PCP...I don't know. Now, go send your sibling some feedback!
Review By [Kaien] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from Cutiepie
Review:
A review? OK, I'll leave a review, just as soon as I get word that "Brother Dear" has handed over the feedback. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from aewnaur
Review:
oh wow.. kinda sad.. are you going to continue this? cause i can see it either way.. finished or just a start.. sniff.. really feel bad for xander now.. gotta go read something with some sex in it to flush the sad taste outa my mouth .. lol.. hehe.. Aewnaur
Review By [aewnaur] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from war
Review:
very good crossover.Greg was lucky Riley took everything before Brass saw it with the mood he was in he would have lost it.poor Xander sucks when your screwed over by family even family you know you can't trust but because their family you try to anyway no matter how many times you been burned by them.good story.
Review By [war] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Please tell your brother he's made an excellent job of this story. I think its the first time I've seen a CSI cross where the Scoobies don't spill all about the supernatural. Poor Greg.

Oh yeah, nearly forgot... Brother! Hey! You there lurking by the computer! Dish the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from azulkan
Review:
Really liked this story. Even felt sorry for Xander. Now tell your stinky brother to give you back your reviews! lol
Review By [azulkan] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from banner
Review:
I really really enjoyed that story. From start to finish.
I love the way you crossed the stories, the way you kept the characters true to canon, and the resolution. Very well done.
Review By [banner] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from Elleria
Review:
Sequel? Please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
I think you need to add a warning to the story summary.

Anyone with a heart condition may find themselves in serious trouble brought on by uncontrollable laughter during Xander's interogation.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellent job here. Liked all of the characterizations, thought they were all pretty much spot-on. Your brother captured Xander's attitude perfectly with the 'no breakfast - are we having lunch here' comment, and did a good job with Brass's attitude also. ;-)

Is your brother planning on having any of the other Scoobies pass through Vegas in the future and possibly interact with the local PD and CSI people? A Willow and Grissom meeting would be fascinating to read, as would a Buffy-in-her-mindless-cheerleader persona interacting with either Warrick or Nick. ;-)


Very good job and hoping to see more.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vegas Vacation" from oberon
Review:
Excellent work.
Review By [oberon] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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