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The Fifth Brother

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sessgurl
Review:
i love the story and i was wondering when you were going to update?? i just finished watching the movie and was also wondering if you were going to follow the movie or buffy or a mix of both. anyway update soon please.
Review By [sessgurl] • Date [29 Dec 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MerKat
Review:
I like the story. It's cute.
Review By [MerKat] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Infinix
Review:
Great idea, please continue.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [19 Sep 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
An interesting idea that could work. The story is spoiled by poor spelling and grammar.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [20 Mar 06] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from gabbygal
Review:
i think you should keep on goin, i just watched four bothers last night, so i could read this today. So far its really good, so i hope you keep on goin.
Review By [gabbygal] • Date [19 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TorturedAngel
Review:
interesting so far. curious to see where you take Alex :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gnome
Review:
I like this a lot! I hope you add more to it soon! *hugs*
Review By [Gnome] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WhiteWolf
Review:
Is Xander going to make contact with Willow and Jessie?
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Stemaphie
Review:
This was amazing and i can't wait to see where your going with this story. Now i'm curious to see if you are going to show xander growing up with the family or just jump to when they are adults!
Review By [Stemaphie] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ladeia
Review:
Interesting start but can you put what the crossover is on there? I don't recognize it right off. Hurry back with more.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from frogstompinfun
Review:
OOOOOOOH I loved the movie so much and I love your story so far to, it's really good and is verry true to some of the feelings that go through the heads of some kids when they come to a new home ( I was one myself) so keep up the good work and I hope to read more soon.

Phantom
Review By [frogstompinfun] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LVGreed
Review:
When I got this movie in the mail from Netflix I was a little apprehensive about watching. It just didn’t seem to me to have much promise of being any good. Well, I was pleasantly surprised how much I liked it. As for your story I liked how right off the bat you set the personalities of the brothers. I especially like Jack playing with his guitar. I’m curious if you are going to show us some more of their youth and Xander settling in or do like snap shots of events over the years leading up to movie or jump right to the movie from Xander’s perspective. I wonder how he will do with Jack’s death and that of his mother. When and how or even if you are going to introduce the nightlife and get Xander back to Sunny-D.

So, to answer your question I think his is a great start and I was pleasantly surprised with the story and am so far enjoying your work. I look forward to reading more of this story.

LVG
Review By [LVGreed] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from tohonomike
Review:
Um, could you tell us what the crossover is? Xander with brothers in Detroit? Good start.
Review By [tohonomike] • Date [18 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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