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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from tohonomike
Review:
Good to read this one again, John. If I promise to add it to my 'Recommended Reading' will you promise to continue writing new material?
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, Mike. I'm working on trying to finish up some of my other works in progress, but I will try to get another chapter of this out soon.
Review By [tohonomike] • Date [27 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Sadfru
Review:
Vengence!!! awesome fight scene, but really wish spike had gotten one shot of with the arm what can i say, I like violence :)
Comments from author:
Spike did get one shot off, and all he managed to do was kill some poor defenseless ceiling tiles. ;-)

Don't worry - there's plenty of violence coming up in future chapters.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [27 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from banner
Review:
This is a Xander we all knew could happen. I've always thought that X was the most dangerous of the BtVS characters. Everyone underestimated him all the time.
But we knew.
Comments from author:
Even without any training, Xander managed to basically hold his own against most of the enemies they went up against, so he'd have to be even more dangerous once he did get some training.
Review By [banner] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from LFW
Review:
Quite the different Xander
I do believe that you have showed a Xander comparable to 'General Buffy'
In the fact that life changes us. Not in the psycho 'General Buffy' way.
Very interesting, nice bit of angst and some good Buffybashing.
It is nice that Joyce is still around(some Joyce and Xander moments?).
I miss Tara and Dawn, but they are not part of this story.
And an Angel that is moving more to his potential.
I am looking forward to more.
Great.
Comments from author:
Glad you picked up that aspect concerning Xander. He's been through a lot of the same stresses that Buffy did by season seven, with the same lack of relief or chance to unwind that afflicted her.

And I was not bashing Buffy, merely have her point out the obstacles she's going to have to overcome if her attempts to regain her friendship with Xander are to have any chance of success.
Review By [LFW] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from banner
Review:
Xander got some training - I always thought he got short-changed in the martial arts department.
I love the grown-up dangerous Wes.
Comments from author:
Yeah, he got a lot of training, and you'll see him using some of it in the next chapter.

Glad to hear you liked my version of Wes.
Review By [banner] • Date [19 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am amazed at how many emotions your story is generating in me. Excellent job with the altered characters and their motivations. I can't wait to see what Wes is up to. I also hope Xander can be reunited with the other Scoobies. But my most urgent hope is to see Xander do great bodily harm to the Bleached Blunder. Oh, I so look forward to Xander's meeting with Spike again. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. I appreciate hearing from you.

Xander and Spike meet in the next chapter, and I'm pretty sure you'll enjoy seeing it.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Very interesting. I like that Xan got the Key energy and has found ways to manipulate it. I really hope you make Buffy, Willow and Cordelia suffer some more before any making up.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.

All I can say about what's comig up is that there's a lot more going on than has been shown yet.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [12 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Never mind my question about Tara. I just read your answer to an earlier question about the missing blonde witch. Sorry.
Comments from author:
No prob. Glad you're enjoying the story so much.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent update. I like how your Willow is reacting to Giles' history of the Hellmouth while they were in England. I'm thinking the unknown female is a robot and the 'Mastermind' is the preskinned Warren. Did Tara ever show up in this alternate Sunnydale? And if so, what happened to her? I would have thought another magic worker would have been a help to the Alt-scoobies. Please keep updating this nifty story.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. More information on the girl and the mastermind will be in future chapters I'll be posting relatively soon.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from OrneryFife
Review:
Ya See folks? I new there was something that could be done with Chi or is that 'Key' energy, and that Mr. Whedon was just too lazy to conseptualize it.

Actually, I'm running on the theory that if he'd given even a little more 'umph' to any of the other main characters, especially Xander, Oz (besides his lame wereScrappy power), or Cordelia (while she was still in BtVS), they probably would have completely overshadowed Buffy's character. That's it...rant over.

Anywho, like the new characterization of Xander but please don't neuter him. Regardless of what powers and responsibilities you give him, he's still a guy who likes women, and Rosey Palm will only take him so far. Update frequently.
Comments from author:
All I'll say is that I agree completely with your analysis of the lack of any real development in ANY of the characters on the show.

And that Xander's relationships (or lack thereof) with the three original Scooby women will be an important part of this story.
Review By [OrneryFife] • Date [30 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Sadfru
Review:
Is willow going to go the bad magic route and what happened to Tara? she was/is one of my favourite characters, wonder how Anya will react to the fact that Xander is an Uber badass demon hunter with friends and everything.

Till next time :)
Comments from author:
Willow is not much advanced beyond what she knew during senior year of high school, since she focused much more of her time and energy on her classes in this 'verse, especially since Oz was still around to help 'occupy' her time. ;-)

Tara either never made it to Sunnydale or else didn't survive her first year in town, so she won't be showing up in this story.

Anya's reaction to seeing Xander v. 2.0 will be a lot of fum to see, once the two finally meet. I will say that it won't be for a while yet.
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [29 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banner
Review:
Verrry different Xander...

I'm enjoying the new Xander (and Wes.)
Comments from author:
Glad to hear that. You'll be seeing just how much everyone has changed in the next few chapters.
Review By [banner] • Date [29 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DTHunter
Review:
Hot damn! The sequel! More, more, more, please!
Comments from author:
I take it you liked this? ;-)

More on Wednesday.
Review By [DTHunter] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kizunakat
Review:
I soooo love the way you are going with this story cant wait for more. kizuna
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll post the next chapter on Wednesday.
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is a very interesting alternate-Buffyverse. The girl I am guessing is the robot April and Meers the Rat is up to his old tricks. I can't wait to see What Happens Next. Please keep writing.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear you like this. The next chapter will be posted on Wednesday.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [26 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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