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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Tempe
Review:
So I just read this and am really hoping there is a sequel as you left off in such an amazing spot! Admittedly it can stop there successfully by why stop a good thing? Anyway, great job and I loved the ending.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)Mari
Review:
That last line--about clothes--was perfect.
Comments from author:
*beams* Thanks. I thought it tied it all up nicely and brought Buffy full circle.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [24 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Cristina
Review:
*snicker*...here they go...again.

nice!

:)
Review By [Cristina] • Date [17 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Bluedove
Review:
This was beautiful. The sadness, the peace, and the softness of your style in this story are very moving.
Review By [Bluedove] • Date [2 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Good ending! Will there be a sequel to this story at all?
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Bunney
Review:
wow there totally better be a sequal. I wanna see what happens!

later and love
bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [25 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from gigi
Review:
Good story. Were you planning on writing a sequel?
Review By [gigi] • Date [24 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from FireFlyFan
Review:
Wow excellent story from start to finish. I never really thought what Buffy would be like as an ascended being but this seems to me to be as close to dead on as can be. The character personalities and everything were spot on in my opinion. Again excellent story, oh and if there happens to be a continuation of the line that would be great too.

FFF
Review By [FireFlyFan] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from mymatedave
Review:
Just read this all the way through, really good fic. Leaves you with a smile on your face.
Review By [mymatedave] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Javian
Review:
What an end. Nice.
Review By [Javian] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Oh no it's over! and it seems like just the beginning to me. Will there be a sequel? It was great thanks to you.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Very good story. Ascended in NAME only. Not in any other way that matters.
I guess one should not be suprised that mediocrity and oblivious is rewarded in that plane as it seems to be here.

Actually I doubt that Buffy would have put up with it as long as she did. She never really had all that much patience.

Do hope you do a sequel.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Thedruid
Review:
Huh.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from danielbuffyfan
Review:
Ohh!!! You have to have a sequal. Do her and Daniel get together romantically?? *begging on knees*
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from DevJannz
Review:
This is just another example of why I love your writing. You capture the characters and make them familiar but at the same time, give them new things that just go so well with them.

I love how you write Buffy/Daniel. It is one of my favorite crossover pairings and yours is the best I have found.

Hope we get to see a sequel to this (or better yet an update to Hollow Places. LOVE that story!!!).
Review By [DevJannz] • Date [23 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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