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Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Sin within the Sin" from Rob
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More please, you've really got me hooked with this one!


Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Sin within the Sin" from Unbalanced
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I absolutely love the story. Its original, funny, and has a plot(gasps). I read too many stories that had little plot and rushed conversations. My hats off to ya.
Review By [Unbalanced] • Date [18 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Child of the Soldats" from brokenangel
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Forgot to review chap 14. I like how you've included Cordy,Faith,and even Oz in the Ninja stuff, it should prove interesting in the end.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [18 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Sin within the Sin" from brokenangel
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Nice chapter addition. I enjoy the closeness of Xander/Faith/Cordelia student/teacher/siblings or possibly love interest down the road. Leaves a lot of possibilities in which to build the story. Anywho great story.
Review By [brokenangel] • Date [18 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Sin within the Sin" from Sadfru
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Great Fight scene but wonder why he didn't take the strange black amulet/medallion thing that healed her from her neck, hope for more soon :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [3 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Sin within the Sin" from HolyKnight
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Hmmm..all is ok...and very nice...

But i see what Faith, Cordelia and Oz are going to act like Naruto after the battle in the End.....

i forsee a month or two of highly obssesed training of the three in the summer......while the events of Noir come to an end....

after that...i can see what they would have a level equivalent of mid-high Chuunin...
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [3 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fifteen: Sin within the Sin" from Rob
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Great part. Curious to see what Xander gets up to now. Maybe take out a few Watcher Council guys?

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [3 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Child of the Soldats" from zagan
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Very good story. I don't know Noir very well, but I love Naruto (well pre time-skip anyway). The combination of the two whit Xander is more than interesting I look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [zagan] • Date [29 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Child of the Soldats" from BenTulsa
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i so like this one. Faith is great getting them to come. to bad they can not just share him.:) its getting down to the end of the school year can not wait for more.
Review By [BenTulsa] • Date [27 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Child of the Soldats" from NoLifeKing
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Great chapter again. :-)
Interesting that Oz, Cordy and Faith are genius level ninja too. :-)
Will Xander also try to seal the mayor demon like the hellmouth-beast? Would give a hell of a power boost. *grin*
I really wonder what Valkyrie plans to get from the mayor ascending? Who wants a first circle demon wander earth?
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [27 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Child of the Soldats" from Rob
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Awesome part again. And I really liked how the great Alexander-Super Ninja was completely at his girls' mercy. :)

And really interesting and involved plot going on here with Altena, Soldats, and the Watchers.

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [27 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen: Child of the Soldats" from Sadfru
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poor faith! great chapter but the whole oz shot someone...would have thought it would have more emphasis (shrug) I'm just picky, hope for more soon:)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [27 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen: Requiem of Lost Innocence" from Questara
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Dang, good job with this chapter. I actually cried their during the death scene.
Review By [Questara] • Date [23 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen: Requiem of Lost Innocence" from Rob
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Awesome part. And very sad end for his little sis. It's just to bad that Janna isn't around to help him find out more info on the Watchers and Soldats. He really needs a roadmap. :)

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [22 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen: Requiem of Lost Innocence" from Sadfru
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would have thought the fight would have gone a little longer but he does have experience, sealed demon and a prophecy on his side, about the demon, what exactly does it do, does it heal, enhance, etc is he like Naruto? great story and hope for more soon :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [22 May 06] • Not Rated
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