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Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from Kirallie
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Great start! You even brought Itachi into it, neat. Don't really know anything about Noir but still am enjoying this. Hope you do continue! Exactly how much of Itachi's abiities did he retain? Can he use chakra? Xander as an assassin, will he decide to do something to his oh so wonderful parents? Like sacare them into leaving him alone?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [26 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from Riyirowe
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This is fun, and I would enjoy seeing more of it. I don't know a whole lot about the stories of Naruto and Noir, but what I do know, and what you have given here, makes me really interested. I hope that you update, and soon!
Review By [Riyirowe] • Date [26 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
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Intresting start, i look forward to the next chapter
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [26 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from Azrael2
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I like your beginning, please continue.
Review By [Azrael2] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from TorturedAngel
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Very good start, never seen the Noir series, but this is very good. More plz :)
Review By [TorturedAngel] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from ChaosRonin
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I loved this idea its awesome cant wait to see what vengeance Alexander is going to take especially with the extra skill he have from Itachi heheh update soon please ^_^
Review By [ChaosRonin] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from HolyKnight
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Bloody Hell...........the fight with Chloe will allow Alexander to gain Mangekyou Sharingan, isn't true?.......that...or taking down a vamped Willow...

And he can access or not Chakra in the BTVS dimension?
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from alexanderknight
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I like the idea of the story and the path you've set for Alexander so far and if you still need a Beta reader i will be happy to offer my services on this story and any other future you may have. if you need to reach me e-mail me at spiritglovebryan@yahoo.com
Review By [alexanderknight] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from WingL
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Interesting story. Looking forward to more.
Review By [WingL] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from AnimeRonin
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Hehehe, very interesting take on Halloween and Noir. Should be interesting when he meets up with the other two ladies, and how he's change and will possibly change them. I think you should continue this, and if you need a beta, well, I'll try if you need one. Haven't seen the Noir series, though (makes note to do that).
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Forsaken Children" from Rob
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Got to say, I really liked this one. Overall a very good start. The one thing I would caution you about is who Xander does the assasin thing on. Maybe he could stick to demons as a general rule, only taking out REALLY evil humans. That way Xander could keep his 'Xander' core, instead of just turning him into a cold killing machine.

I do hope you continue this, it has real potential.

Rob
Review By [Rob] • Date [25 Apr 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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