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Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from Thewander
Review:
Very good, just too bad you cant keep up a Bolo story in Sunnydale. Anything that can shoot down a ship in orbit is a little to powerfull, but it a great read
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I wish you were'nt right... man... maybe I can cross this over with stargate and make him blow up Anubis :)
Review By [Thewander] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from Sadfru
Review:
Gotta ask...was he thinking about sex there at the end??? :)
Comments from author:
Being called "Commander" by a Bolo would certainly give me a tingly feeling :D
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [8 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from grd
Review:
I do hope you will at least write the confrontation between the Bolo and the Judge. While possibly very short, Xander and Cordy's time with Nacho will be very entertaining.
Comments from author:
Hmm I wish I could but there's just no way I could justify using the Bolo on the Judge with even some of his smaller weapons never mind his Hellbore :\

Unless... Ooh I think I'm having a plan.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from Bill
Review:
LOL! So very well done!
Comments from author:
Awesome, thanks!
Review By [Bill] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from Saphrine
Review:
I cannot wait to see where you take this! Good job
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it!
Review By [Saphrine] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
For a first story; you definately know how to get my attention! I'll admit; I'm not familiar with the Bolo series; or, really, anything from Baen Books; but; I loved Xander's reaction to it. I think you have enough to do a follow up; especially as Xander and Cordelia learn more about what the Bolo is; and can do. This would also give us (the clueless reader) insight into the Bolo world as well.

Looking forward to seeing what else you come up with.

red
Comments from author:
Thanks!

I might do a follow-up down the line, and you really should check out the Bolo series. Very cool! Let me put it this way, if a Bolo fires it's main Hellbore at something... the energy released is enough to create a small nuclear explosion.
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from LFW
Review:
OH HELL YES

Thanks for the Bolo, cause Bolo's rock
and Xander...what a combination

Judge- if nothing else run him over
The Mayor-not a problem, just a bigger target
Glory-might be a Hell god but I do not think she is going to move faster than a Bolo aiming.

Even better in the Stargate verse...Goauld in orbit- not no more
or Battlestar Galactica at Earth

Sorry for the rambling

Way cool
Comments from author:
Yep, having a tank which can take out startships on low orbit beats the hell out of a Volkswagen. :)

Glad you liked it!
Review By [LFW] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
intresting start, i look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from Greywizard
Review:
I *LOVED* this!!! ;-)

Buffy is going to be *SO* jealous! ("Giles, why can't I get one of those?")

For a first effort, this was fantastic! Loved the crossover and I'm jealous I didn't think of doing this first! ;-)

Definitely looking forward to seeing what you'll be giving us next.
Comments from author:
*JOY*

Thanks man, I'll be leaving glowing reviews of all your fics I've loved soon. :)

Hmmm, I'll give you a hint... Jack of Blades.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from cwolf
Review:
*rubs eyebrows* of course you left several avenues open.

1: No matter what weapon is used, the Judge and anything in it's immediate vicinity will probably get vaporized. Quite possibly half a block.

2: Not even Riley and the pajama brigade could ignore something that big.

So, what are the ramifications of blowing up half of Sunnydale as the Bolo pursues Xanders order to kill demons?
Comments from author:
Thanks :)

1. Possibly, more. >:)

2. Yeah but how would they catch it? A big net? :D

Kidding aside, I deliberately ended the story there because of the huge ramifications. Anything resembling a sequel will most likely not happen in Sunnydale as Nacho is just TOO powerful to be of any use. Hell I might have to crossover with Stargate just to find something worth fighting. :)
Review By [cwolf] • Date [8 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from Rob
Review:
LOL! I love it. Xander with a Bolo. You've GOT to continue with this one. I can see it: "Angelus, let me introduce you to my NOT so little friend."

Rob
Comments from author:
Awesome :D

I might one day write a follow-up, but it will take a LONG time to work out all the consequences.
Review By [Rob] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hellmouth, meet Hellbore." from war
Review:
good story a Bolo in Sunnydale that would make things interesting.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Review By [war] • Date [8 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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