Review of chapter "Chapter One" from sinisterBR
before i read this - ad possible get really into it - do you plan to continue the story?
Review By [sinisterBR
] • Date [2 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from halfbloodpuffskin
Love the story, please update 'cause we miss you!
Review By [halfbloodpuffskin
] • Date [6 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from blackkitten
i really love your story!!!!
pls write asap a new chapter and post it ;)
Review By [blackkitten
] • Date [28 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from AXanFan
I read a lot of the other reviews so it made me think of a few things. I am glad you put a note in the story about the claws, but I agree with others that say that Logan did not have claws at all until after the Weapon X project. I also agree that the word is it is painful and damaging when Wolverine extends his claws so it would have to be for Xander -- I don't think he would find that so fun even if he likes having a new weapon. Also this may be picky, but the implication is that Wolverine is actually VERY heavy due to the metal added to his bones. I think it would be really noticeable to Angel when he picked him up to carry to the bedroom.
I have one more request. While I have no problem with a little bashing of the other Scoobies, I don't think it is fair to carry it too far. They are only human and teenagers at that, not to mention that they have a lot of traumatic stresses to deal with. It would not be unusual for any or all of the kids to get at least somewhat self-absorbed. Please just don't make it "Saint Xander" against the "Evil Scoobies".
I did not mean to get all critical -- I really like the concepts you have going here. I love Xander and am glad that while his life is not perfect he has some good things going on. I saw a review where they did not like or believe a shy Angel. I don't mind at all. I think it could be that he has never really been in love before and it makes him nervous. Just don't make him too mushy -- he is still a 400+ year old vampire and a guy. (ha,ha)
I really love the idea of Logan being Xander's Father. I can't wait to read about their meeting -- I hope it takes a while for them to completely accept each other -- I like a little angst before a happy ending. I can't wait to see how the others react to all the changes. I also really like the idea of Oz at least becoming a good friend to Xander. Cordy is cool as Xander's best friend.
Sorry so long winded. I only review what I like. Hope you write more soon.
Review By [AXanFan
] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Dragonelf
I really hope you get inspired to continue this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
If you can't convince them, confuse them.
- Harry S. Truman
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [14 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from crystal
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I HOPE YOU UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! *Pouts* pretty please with a cherrie on top?
Review By [crystal
] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Faeri
Ch.7 was awesome! I hope that the meeting between father and son turn out ok and I wonder if Oz could be added to the Angel/Xander mix, it would be awesome. I cant wait for the next part to come out!! Keep 'em coming! You rock!
Please update soon!!! ^_^
Review By [Faeri
] • Date [8 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from TouchoftheWind
Very good story, i hope Spike and Dru make an appearance, maybe because they need sire blood for Dru thats willingly given, that way we dont have to worry about them being staked, LOL! I want Angel and Xan to hurry up and get it on! And will any of the other XMen make an appearance? More soon please!
Review By [TouchoftheWind
] • Date [20 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Chaoskitten
can it be next chapter time please?
Review By [Chaoskitten
] • Date [13 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from mpsshadowmaster
lair, lair, pants on fire! now hurry up and get it done!!!!! and posted!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE HOW IT GOES BETWEEN LOGAN AN' XANDER AN' CORDY AN' ANGEL AN' EV'RY BODY ELSE!!!!!!!
BTW, how old are you having Logan be? In the x-men universe, I've got a painted quarter riding on him being alive during the crusades, and an odd shaped piece of plastic that he was alive during at least the Crucifixion. Not necessarily THERE, but alive. :)
Review By [mpsshadowmaster
] • Date [15 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from MistieMossflower
This is a great story and I can't wait until Logan & Xander meet and for an explanation on how Xander got metal claws. ^_^
Review By [MistieMossflower
] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from charliesdragon
Just come across this fic and I can't wait to see the meeting between Logan and xander, and the rest of the Scoobies reactions to Xans' claws and the fallout from finding out about his family :)
Good job on this fic btw.
Review By [charliesdragon
] • Date [22 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Elleria
Review By [Elleria
] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from speediebuffy
Ooh! I'm all tingly! I can't wait to see how this turns out
Review By [speediebuffy
] • Date [29 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from FairyQilan
I have to say something. Xander couldn't have inherited the claws because they aren't genetic, his only mutation is his healing, the claws were put in by the weapon X scientists.
Review By [FairyQilan
] • Date [6 Oct 06] • Rating [4 out of 10]