hi
i really love your story!!!!
pls write asap a new chapter and post it ;)
yours kitten

I read a lot of the other reviews so it made me think of a few things. I am glad you put a note in the story about the claws, but I agree with others that say that Logan did not have claws at all until after the Weapon X project. I also agree that the word is it is painful and damaging when Wolverine extends his claws so it would have to be for Xander -- I don't think he would find that so fun even if he likes having a new weapon. Also this may be picky, but the implication is that Wolverine is actually VERY heavy due to the metal added to his bones. I think it would be really noticeable to Angel when he picked him up to carry to the bedroom.

I have one more request. While I have no problem with a little bashing of the other Scoobies, I don't think it is fair to carry it too far. They are only human and teenagers at that, not to mention that they have a lot of traumatic stresses to deal with. It would not be unusual for any or all of the kids to get at least somewhat self-absorbed. Please just don't make it "Saint Xander" against the "Evil Scoobies".

I did not mean to get all critical -- I really like the concepts you have going here. I love Xander and am glad that while his life is not perfect he has some good things going on. I saw a review where they did not like or believe a shy Angel. I don't mind at all. I think it could be that he has never really been in love before and it makes him nervous. Just don't make him too mushy -- he is still a 400+ year old vampire and a guy. (ha,ha)

I really love the idea of Logan being Xander's Father. I can't wait to read about their meeting -- I hope it takes a while for them to completely accept each other -- I like a little angst before a happy ending. I can't wait to see how the others react to all the changes. I also really like the idea of Oz at least becoming a good friend to Xander. Cordy is cool as Xander's best friend.

Sorry so long winded. I only review what I like. Hope you write more soon.

Thanks!!!

I really hope you get inspired to continue this story.

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I LOVE THIS STORY!! I HOPE YOU UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!! *Pouts* pretty please with a cherrie on top?

Ch.7 was awesome! I hope that the meeting between father and son turn out ok and I wonder if Oz could be added to the Angel/Xander mix, it would be awesome. I cant wait for the next part to come out!! Keep 'em coming! You rock!



Please update soon!!! ^_^

Very good story, i hope Spike and Dru make an appearance, maybe because they need sire blood for Dru thats willingly given, that way we dont have to worry about them being staked, LOL! I want Angel and Xan to hurry up and get it on! And will any of the other XMen make an appearance? More soon please!

can it be next chapter time please?

lair, lair, pants on fire! now hurry up and get it done!!!!! and posted!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE HOW IT GOES BETWEEN LOGAN AN' XANDER AN' CORDY AN' ANGEL AN' EV'RY BODY ELSE!!!!!!!



BTW, how old are you having Logan be? In the x-men universe, I've got a painted quarter riding on him being alive during the crusades, and an odd shaped piece of plastic that he was alive during at least the Crucifixion. Not necessarily THERE, but alive. :)

This is a great story and I can't wait until Logan & Xander meet and for an explanation on how Xander got metal claws. ^_^

Hey,

Just come across this fic and I can't wait to see the meeting between Logan and xander, and the rest of the Scoobies reactions to Xans' claws and the fallout from finding out about his family :)

Good job on this fic btw.

charliesdragon

Love this.

Ooh! I'm all tingly! I can't wait to see how this turns out

I have to say something. Xander couldn't have inherited the claws because they aren't genetic, his only mutation is his healing, the claws were put in by the weapon X scientists.

I love what you have so far. I can't wait for Logan's and Xander's reaction when they to meet.

Keep the updates comin'

Can I jut say 'guh'! I love this story, and your other one, and I'm dieing to see what happens next! I love Xangel and I looooooooooooooooove this fic and you have to update, ya jus' gooootta! I shall camp out near my computer and diligently await updates. *gloooomp* Ooooooh, and I wanna see when Xan meets Logan ^^