I was looking for some different stories, and found yours in one of the lists. I don't mind WIP, though I am hoping that RL has calmed down enough for you to start posting again.
I found this a bit over the top sort of, but well written enough to keep reading. It would be a plausible outcome if Buffy hadn't run. I look forward to when you can post again.
I really would like to see more of this, how the rest of the gang react to Devon's news, and what happens when Xander meets the rest of the Miami gang.
What happened to the promised updates? this fic is wonderful so far. I love what you have and I really really hope that your muse allows you to update this wonderful fic again soon!
Review By [spring] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Whining kids on a long and boring car trip...ARE WE THERE YET!!?? Impatient fan of First Priority... IS THE HIATUS OVER YET!!?? :oD Please please finish this story.
Review By [kayron] • Date [25 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Great story!!! How will Xander adapt to Miami? Looking forward to seeing Joyce, Dawn and Devon face the group over what they've done. Hope there's more soon!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [10 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It's spring, and I hope that your muse is working, and that you are writing. I am looking forward to seeing Dawn's reaction, and Xander's meeting with his brother and step mother.
Review By [desartartt] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I just read First Priority again. I think I like it more now than I did on my first read through. Spring is officially here. Will there be an update soon dare I hope? I'm REALLY looking forward to the so-called friends getting a kick in the pants by Devon.
Review By [kayron] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Totally awesome! I love that Xander is his own man and doesn't have to rely on anyone to save him. Plz, plz, update again soon, I can't wait to read more.
Review By [AnitaPotter] • Date [15 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I joined TTH just so I could leave a review :o) . I really like the story, the fact that Xan finally gets to be strong (no donut boy here!), and I can't wait for the so-called friends to get theirs. More soon please!
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Mar 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]