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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Rivana
Review:
*dries tears*
I usually just frown at all the Xander abuse stories out there, but once in a while you get something really nice...
Thanks.
Comments from author:
Awww. Really don't know what to say, just Thank You.
Review By [Rivana] • Date [21 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ObsidianDragon
Review:
Great story, update soon.
Review By [ObsidianDragon] • Date [21 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Amaya
Review:
heh, nice way of tying the fandoms togeter man.
Review By [Amaya] • Date [18 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from hilarydilarydoc
Review:
Hi, great story idea, but I think you have Xander coming off a little too harsh right off the bat in his confrontation with Buffy and the Scoobies. Xander would try to placate and explain at first, and when they didn't listen to him or continued to accuse him after his explanation, then he would lose his temper. Giving into the Hyena and decking Buggy after she trashed his father's care is in character with an already angry Xander, but the harsh, sarcastic first response from Xander is off somehow. Please keep writing, I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Review By [hilarydilarydoc] • Date [16 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Nyn
Review:
Ooo, I love seeing Horatio all protective over family. This is an interesting story! I look forward to Xander getting to meet his uncle.
Review By [Nyn] • Date [15 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)renatria
Review:
I look forward to more- especially when Oz finally submits to Xander
Review By [(Past Donor)renatria] • Date [15 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
More please, as quickly as you can write it :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [15 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Kaien
Review:
Like this chapter. Can't wait to see where you're going with it!
Review By [Kaien] • Date [14 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from kizunakat
Review:
very cool. cant wait to see where you go with this one. kizuna
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [14 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
Hurrah the evil bitch and bastard are dead!
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [14 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The action narrative, expository narrative and psychology of the story continue to be interesting.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cjdunk
Review:
You bad person you. I know have visions of Xander taking Oz on the front lawn with witnesses. I want more
Review By [cjdunk] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightslayer
Review:
this is great. update soon.
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [11 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kaien
Review:
I like this! I really like hyena!Xander, and I love it when he tells the other Scoobies where to go. Hope he and Oz get together at some point!
Comments from author:
sorry no plans at the 'mo for Oz, but you have given me something to think about.
Review By [Kaien] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Liked.. your take on Xander's sexuality and the hyena. No so much... you take on Giles not listening to Xander's reasons. But since the story is more about Xander than Giles, I overall liked the story.
Comments from author:
I get what you mean about Giles I just needed him this way at the 'mo to get the story where it was going. This is not the last to be seen of the Scoobies, so maybe I can make up for it later.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
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