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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
Review:
Interesting start! Stupid Scoobies, need a major reality check. Go Xan!!! More soon please!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hand
Review:
I'm not sure who the character is in this story but I don't think it's Xander.
Review By [hand] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
Everyone is so completely out of character as to be unrecognizable. If Xander wasn't named Xander in this fic, I would think he was just some random original character. Buffy has never been into personal property destruction. Not to mention, Xander didn't have a car in season 2. And Dawn certainly didn't exist back then. I think to make this story work you're going to need to *slow* down, reframe the characters so they're at least recognizable as the BtVS characters we know and love, and give a whole heck of a lot of backstory.
Comments from author:
Ok I'll forget about the car 'cos I did explained the next chapter and the Dawn thing will be explained but in quite a while, I didn't just shove her in I just had planned ahead but maybe I should have said that. Personally I don't think Xander is too out of character just has more Hyena in him which brings out traits not often seen in canon Xander, though he does come to heads with Buffy a few times over Angel. Buffy while having no history of property damage does have a way of violence when she doesn't get her way, as she couldn't get to Xan she did the next best thing. Sorry if it ain't you cup of tea.
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
I like this bad ass Xander!
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [9 May 06] • Not Rated
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